I enjoyed this story immensely. I particularly enjoyed the way you wove the erroneous Baritsu of EMPT into the proper Bartitsu for this story. Nice. Very nice. More please?

With perspicacity for character and the telling detail, this author weaves a gently humorous vignette into the warp and woof of Holmes and Watson's lives. However, her stylistic quirks leave me puzzled: is she innovative or simply trying too hard to impress the reader with clever neologisms and novel usages?

Overall, this author displays her usual firm control of plot and dialogue. On a one to 10 scale, this author deserves an eight (two points off for my discomfort with stylistic quirks).

This is a very good read, and I thank you for sharing it.

Great!

wonderful! I hope to see more of this soon!