Reviews for Snacktime
romanceaholic chapter 4 . 11/11/2010
All four outtakes were very good. It was great to see some of the missing parts to the story of It's only lunch.
flyrbrd chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
Thank you for Jasper's POV. I hope he and Alice work it out.
flyrbrd chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
Thanks for this tidbit;)
flyrbrd chapter 3 . 8/28/2010
Thanks for the outtake. They are one of the best things about fan fiction;)
lilmstran chapter 4 . 8/26/2010
loved it, poor alice, shame on jasper and tanya

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter
tkeaton1 chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
ok, now I dont feel robbed! LOL I didnt know the out takes existed! YAY! Love this story!
Sparrow's Lassie chapter 3 . 8/25/2010
God, I love lemonade! Thank you thank you! Juicy stuff! ;)
Sparrow's Lassie chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
That could've gotten really ugly but didn't. :) Alec was an ok guy but a forever Edward fan here. Very nice writing.
lilmstran chapter 2 . 6/25/2010
loved it

i hope to read more outtakes to this story
flyrbrd chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Thank you I love outtakes!
Aylah50 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Wow! Alternate ending indeed! Cool outtake bb! :)
amwine chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
I love it. I am glad you wnt in a different direction and made it

longer! Great job...thanks!
webiegirl chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
so as much as i did like this one b/c they did the deed! i am glad you went the way you did! made it more fustrating for them!



when is the next update?
Sparrow's Lassie chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
I think Edward was just drop kicked out of the stadium. ;) Love the out takes! Bella was just doing what was being done to her but in the end, that wasn't her! Good for Bella for staying true to herself. Great writing!

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