Reviews for Will the Universe Implode?
goldacharmed chapter 3 . 12/24/2013
I loved it. It was great how if we were watching this, the whole thing would take almost no time at all, but you slowed things down so we can see exactly what they were thinking. Great job.
lifelane chapter 3 . 7/29/2013
HA! This is great!
greeneyesCutie chapter 3 . 3/17/2013
Love it ;)
greeneyesCutie chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
Well I'm not breathing well either right now.
greeneyesCutie chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
What a GREAT start!
DragonRose4 chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
I don't think the end is suggestive so much as outright declaring their intentions... Love it! :P Very intense, and hot! Sends tingles down the spine and other places as well... ;)

I wish I had a guy who would look at me like that.
cherrystone.eli chapter 3 . 8/10/2012
awesome! loved it
ValaEnVash chapter 3 . 4/18/2011
woooo00000000oooooo! ha! that's all i need to say. ;)
DudeYouJustTotallyStoleMyCar chapter 3 . 9/23/2010

Wicked story, i apsolutely loved it!
jiminxx chapter 3 . 6/16/2010
this was so cute! :) great writing by the way
Molleyn chapter 3 . 6/5/2010
This kept me smiling all the way through! I especially liked "With the gentlest pressure, he rests his forehead against hers; (...) ", that was quite a beautiful moment.
Bella.Barbaric chapter 3 . 6/4/2010
Aww... Lovely end to a lovely story. As for the suggestiveness, I for one couldn't care less, it's too sweet!

Lovely story again :) Well done and thank you for sharing!
StarryNight101 chapter 3 . 6/3/2010
I love every bit of it! Perfect plotless fluff. Just what I wanted. :) I love being inside both of their heads, it was just totally awesome.
darryenmw chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Thank you so much! I absoluetly loved it! :D
SenceLess chapter 3 . 6/1/2010
Oh, I so love your writing skills and how you can capture the emotions of the scenes...really, really, really fantastic
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