|Reviews for The Floor Is Lava|
| NabooTheEnigma chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
| PhantomPotterGirl chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
l000000000000000000000l XD i love the game the floor is lava! it's awesome :D
| kit chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
| Lioness002 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Oh my gosh that was halarious, so Ben to act like a three year old and so like Julie to be a quick thinker. Well on the bright side, Kevin didn't come in and attack/kill Ben. Good job. :)
| xD chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Nice and awesome. Also, this is the 2000th fanfiction made of benten. ;D
| Jess chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
LOL! That is so funny!
| Skylark Evanson chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
BAHAHAHAHAHAA! I TOTALLY WANT TO SEE THAT IN AN EPISODE! ...maybe tonight... 'Too Hot To Handle' does sound like an epi where t would be possible!
| MewLuna chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Lol this was funny! Good job! :D
| Eternal-Night-Ride chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Without a shadow of a doubt, the last line of this fic is made of pure WIN. Now having gotten that automatic reaction of fan girliness out of the way, I'm going to give a more comprehensive review:
Incredibly well-written with just one particular bump in the grammar. There was one line where there was just a missing period: "Heck, their waiter had simply ignored Gwen and was probably so used to it." That was the only issue I could find and it's not even major. That pretty much speaks greatly of how well-written this is. The characterizations were spot on. The prose is inspired and descriptive. Most importantly, this fic is funny.
Kudos! Write moar plz. :D