|Reviews for Rewriting History|
| Loves to read books chapter 3 . 2/24
Very sweet. If only twilight went somthing like this...
| deltagrl chapter 3 . 2/6
| snow eopard chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
awww i love it
| luvinJ chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
the whole story is finished and is housed at its own blog. rewritinghistoryfanfic on BlogSpot. I took down the rest of the chapters due to the adult content when so many stories were getting pulled. if you want to read it, adult content included, its there.
| Tamara chapter 3 . 6/6/2013
Write more! I love it!
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/5/2013
| BetahimeTsukiko chapter 3 . 11/12/2012
I like how this is progressing, can't wait for more.
| kaylie chapter 3 . 9/26/2012
Amazing. Please write more. I love this. She is way better off with Jacob.
| Jooheika chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
This is my first time reading this story and I would really like to read more but this is where it ends. Is it posted on another site?
| BabyGirl1910 chapter 30 . 5/26/2012
I love this ending! Full circle... You did great
| BabyGirl1910 chapter 16 . 5/21/2012
I like this approach to imprinting and the council. I always had a hard time believing that Jacobs character would just roll over and not stand for what he feels is right.
| Kemq chapter 30 . 3/7/2012
| Kozette92 chapter 30 . 2/8/2012
I Loved this story! its one of my favorites. :)
| Zapphe chapter 30 . 1/26/2012
This is a good story in general. The first few chapters seem to struggle to find its footing but then later on the story floats nicely with rich dialogue and character depth.
The only thing I'm not sure is the idea of Marie/Bella sounds too much like Vampire Diaries' doppleganger plot and to send Marie off to Edward seems like too much of an easy way out. I also feel that there's a lack of confrontation albiet a small one should happen between E/B about his abrupt leaving.
I normally really like a happy ending but this one here seem too much of rounding everyone with someone.
On a positive note, I really like your Jacob, he is extremely lovely and his relationship with Bella developed nicely and convincingly. The Bella here also an improvement from SM's book by being more assertive and less whiny and whimpy.
Overall a job well done.
| jace4ever chapter 30 . 10/6/2011
I loved this story...Not much more can be said, but you did a great job. Thanks for sharing.