Reviews for Getting What You Ask For
Inkfire chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
This story was so harsh, and your characters both so bitter… The beginning was really striking, the "losing battle" with the house-elf - it seemed to show, straight from the start, that Snape had fallen quite low, that he was losing control of himself and only expressing anger. They were so vicious, as if desperate to make each other pay for their suffering and their failure… Ellen's locking herself up the Muggle way seemed to stress her helplessness in front of Severus - no matter how hard she fights back, she can't really have the upper hand, even by leaving… The story of the child was heart-breaking, and I loved Severus' reactions to both her presence and her departure, pictured at the end… Very dark, and very well done.
Narcissa-Weasly chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Horrible story, so much anger, so much that they blame on eachother. Even if I never have thought about Snape as maried, not to talk about kids. This made sense, in a very said way did it make sense.
roslintower chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Wow. You've captured Ellen and Severus' sadness and problems perfectly. Well done!
XxXs T a R i n T h E s K yXxX chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
IS there a sequel? I sure hope there is. Ella's dialog is pretty intense. I can't say I pity Severus at first, but when I read the last part.. I don't know what to feel anymore. I felt bad for both Elena and him. Having divorce is never easy. I wondered why they are getting a divorce but afterwards after reading about their son, I pitied Elena. She must have felt extremely bad especially how Severus blamed her and how Severus never visited the hospital (But he did right? She just didn't know? I sure hope he did.) I pity Severus because in one way or another he loves Elena. Oh please make a story describing Elena and Severus' relationship? How they met, how they fell in love? How their son died? How they quarreled? Long story short, can you please make this a story? Not just a one-shot? Oh please please please.?
Principi Phantasia chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I loved the ending! You proved that Snape isn't the awful person he seemed in the beginning of the story...

I wish they could've expressed their feelings to each other, though.. That way they wouldn't have to end up this sadly :(

haha beautiful, beautiful and moving story :)
greencyanide chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
awesome! wow, just wow! and it's just so typical of snape to act like he doesn't care but die inside bit by bit! Did you write a sequel or prequel to this? I'm dying to read more :)
Julia Claire chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I felt so bad for the both of them - Ellen and Snape. They made me want to cry. It was a really interesting story. For some reason, I really liked that Ellen was a Muggle.
Tyche Nemesis chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
I really like how you make us all think that Snape is the awful emotionless person, but then you prove us all wrong :)

I really like Ellen, she seems a really good character :)

This is great! :)
xabandonedaccountx chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
A very moving piece. You showed the softer side of Snape with an uncanny talent. Wonderful!
Nooks chapter 1 . 6/1/2010

You can really feel the emotions between theses two. The part about the son was really sad.

Different twist to Snape in this story.

Thanks for sharing!
Free Dreamer Night Writer chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Wonderful and very moving. I can really feel the bitterness and hurt
iMissHP chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
It's a very moving piece. I loved how everything has an explanation in the end. The end is brilliant, very sad but brilliant. I loved it!
Dejsha's World chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
This was a bvery sad story. I really enjoyed this and I thought that Snape marrying a Muggle was interesting.

"No, you never had to, you said enough before. You told me I was…" She turned and pushed past him to leave the room, unable to finish. "I buried him and you at the same time. I am done with this, I can't do this anymore."

That was a sad line and I felt sorry for them both.

Jenea chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
I'm sorry that I missed this the first time around but glad I've read it on the repost. Very touching. Thank you.
Il'Diko chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Only you can get me read Snape... This was different characterisation to what we used to... Snape was more human, more vulnerable, he had a soft side too. Yet he stayed here cold and collected... I like this, a nice twist of canon and interesting plot!
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