|Reviews for Battle Cry|
| palmtreehead chapter 1 . 8/2/2018
Great story, I love how subtle and tailored Mori’s promises are. Thanks for sharing
| Book girl fan chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
All of these seem so perfectly in character, it is amazing. I love how Haruhi only needed a single word to understand what he was saying, that Hani always knew his promise but offered him friendship in return, how Tamaki knew that it was important, but not quite sure how, but most of all, I love how his promise to Kyoya was more of an understanding, because he is absolutely right, Kyoya is Tamaki's, all the way through. He'd never admit it but that makes it no less true. And of course, Kyoya knew immediately everything that Mori meant.
| ArtofthePlate chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
You captured his character perfectly. I've only seen the anime, so I don't know how he was developed in the manga, and I never bothered to understand his relationships with anyone other than Honey. This is like a breath of fresh air in my interpretation of him. Thank you. I think he may be my favorite now.
Also, thank you for keeping the other characters true to form.
| Yuuzhan Vong Jedi chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
Words are a promise. Nice. Very nice!
| bluinary chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
I love this! the idea is great, and you executed it so well! mori's voice is almost shockingly eloquent, but I agree that this is what his inner voice most likely sounds like. he's careful with his words, selective.
I enjoyed his views of the characters, particularly of Haruhi and Kyouya. I think you did an excellent job of showing how mori found common ground with kyouya and the twins, and how he (more or less) adores Tamaki and Haruhi. I'm not a big Mori fan, but I do wish he'd gotten greater story in the series, and you did a wonderful job of not only representing his character, but displaying the beauty of community and friendship between the hosts that makes Ouran such a masterpiece.
| TheColdfireAlchemist chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
It's nice to get inside of Mori's head, I love all of the promises he made to his friends and how he made them.
| LucidKren chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
This was really lovely! It was interesting getting into Mori's head. Thanks for sharing!
| ZakuroU chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Yay! Mori! I love Mori.
(Let's play a game - take a shot every time I say 'cool' or 'awesome'...)
And seriously - you are like, the coolest writer ever. I love how in depth the story is. I'd never be able to think of something like this! Awesome! I really liked it, it's a really neat perspective from Mori... It's really cool!
You might recognise me as the one who lest those freakishly blabbering reviews on 'Dailies'. Seriously though - I re-read that just recently and it still isn't any less awesome. And I know this is meant to be a review for this story, but I want to say how cool chapter 22 - The Absolute - was again. I think I already reviewed it, so I can't do it again, but...THAT ONESHOT IS SO AWESOME! I NEARLY CRIED!
You are so cool! I really admire your writing!
| Firefly264 chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
This is so great! Touching, and really well written. I love Mori's voice, and I think this actually sums up his entire character rather well.
| sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Oh this is wonderful. I thought it would be hard to get into Mori's head and listen to what he had to say. And wondered that he would have this much to say. But he did, and it all seemed perfectly in character. It was the eloquence of his actions and his mindsets put onto paper. It was the reasoning and meaning behind the words he never says aloud. It was great to read this. And I loved how everything flowed from one promise to another, one acknowledgment to the next. Oh yayyyyyyy. This was great. :3
| IzLiz chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
O.O wow. ...amazing. I'm stunned at the perfectness of your words.
| LunaBianca chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
This is great. Yeah, I think everyone has a soft spot for Mori, because he's so loyal and silent.
Do you read Bleach? Chad (Yasutora Sado) has a lot in common with Mori. Physically imposing with strong martial skills, rarely speaks, very perceptive and utterly loyal. Another favorite character of mine. ;)
'Battle Cry' reminds me of another excellent fanfic by Saigo no Hajime, titled 'Introspections with Chad.'
| espanamazing chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
...This is really beautiful.
I love what he considers 'promises', and the varying degrees to which the others comprehend.
| The Anonymous Candybar chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Mori manages to be one of my favorite characters of Ouran. Him and Kyoya. Kyoya because he makes me giggle at times. Mori because... it's just impossible not to love him.
I liked this. You're an excellent writer. You have a knack for writing personalities, especially difficult ones like Mori's. I congratulate you. You're awesome.
| KuraiArcoiris chapter 1 . 12/10/2010