Reviews for BomBad Company
Guest chapter 4 . 4/6
Short, SHORT! THIS FUCKING SHORTER THEN SHORT! WHAT WHERE YOU TRYING TO DO? GET IN THE GENIUS WORLD RECORDS FOR SHORTEST CHAPTER EVERY MADE?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
PLEASE CONTINUE!
TolkienGirl052 chapter 4 . 7/19/2013
Interesting...VERY interesting. Chapies are a little short, but this is cool! Love the 'shit, I didn't watch the prequels'
barber477 chapter 4 . 1/31/2013
OH SH T, not those guys again! :) can't wait for the next chapter
Navyseal6 chapter 4 . 1/15/2013
Yo, I can't wait for chapter 5! Ur story is dope
Guest chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
MOAR
Generalfoley chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I honestly say you could've done better.

The chapter was too short, not enough imagery or detail, few punctuation and capitalization errors, and the lack of story in general is a major disappointment.

And you can't just skip the action sequence, you have to write it out.

If you want to be a good writer, then you have to work at it.

Do research, read more books to gain an understanding of writing, and drag the story out. No one wants this short, skipping shit that you're writing.

I look forward to see if you have any improvements in you.

The General
IcePick chapter 4 . 10/30/2011
it's a good story...i'm not familiar with battlefield so it's a bit confusiong so...try to make the chapters a bit longer, i finished all of them in about 5 min.
TheAngryPenguin chapter 4 . 10/12/2011
Great story cant wait for chapter 5
captainrexbest35 chapter 2 . 7/13/2011
look at the cacoonn hope you update soon in chapter 5
captainrexbest35 chapter 4 . 7/13/2011
so they're latin im confused latin or oh latin maaan how come they couldn''t be british and rex DOES NOT HAVE A BRITISH ACCENT
captainrexbest35 chapter 3 . 6/27/2011
loved it they should have a dispute over which is better u.s.a or russia looking forward to next chapter lovin it how rex is so confused
captainrexbest35 chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
love it lovey dovey dovey dove dove dove
Eric123 chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
Write!
bdun chapter 2 . 6/17/2010
i didn't like that first part. if i saw "strange looking and speaking men dressed in green military-like uniforms with a piece of cloth covering their mouth and nose, an open-faced helmet, and silver goggles", and there was a war going on, id ask them who the F*ck they were.
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