Reviews for Living Hurts
FabFlowerChild chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Wow, you're a grreat author. I love your username, too. I'm a Lost fan and Outsiders fan aswell. For your first story, I think you did great! :)
ParzivalHallows chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
This is good, I actually enjoyed it and I it takes a lot for me to enjoy an OC story. (btw I LOVE Lost, the season finale made me cry) the only thing is I must say i have to agreee with the other review, that keeping it like this will be pretty much not an Outsiders story, even though it IS inspired by it. I think, that you should bring at least ONE original outsiders character into it, then you will be able to keep it here XD I enjoyed it, good job. And heed what I said before haha
Mopiece chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
If it's not an Outsiders fanfic, then it does not belong here. It doesn't matter that it was inspired by the Outsiders, it still belongs on fiction press or sites like it. You should remove this and upload it to a site for original work.

Mo
SodapopXPonyboylover chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
This is a good start. Good descriptions. I liked it, which is saying something since I really hate OC fics haha. Good job.