Reviews for Expedient
Guest chapter 15 . 4/12
Uh oh, who's right? Hope it's not Danzo. Sakura might be in trouble...or, more than she would have been after such a long time in Iwa. The suspicion alone would have been damaging.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/12
Was that mine accident really an accident I wonder?
Thebestmindone chapter 35 . 4/4
-_- I'm feeling rather put out at the fact that I just now found this story. It's freaking beautiful. And I love love love Dei-kun. But please update soon? Don't give up on this story. Or on your followers. Because I'm one now. And I'll be waiting.
crazy.batavia chapter 35 . 3/31
Gosh, that is one great story ! I sincerely hope that you will keep on editing. :)
CloverHG chapter 35 . 3/28
Noooooooo, it makes me so sad that this is on hiatus D: I love this story so much and I hope you will get back to it. :) It's a great story and unique and writen well, so we'll done
Mariagoner chapter 35 . 3/20
This fanfic keeps me on the edge of my freaking seat. I have no idea how you manage to keep all the plot-lines straight but I'm goddamn ENTHRALLED by this story - as well as how vital, amazing, passionate and intelligent your Sakura is. Fabulous work!
K chapter 35 . 3/18
Too hard on yourself... It was good. You always leave me wanting more. Oh my love/hate relationship with this damn story. Hehe!
Fish chapter 35 . 3/14
3333 this story is so good! I've been reading this obsessively for 3 days like someone possessed and it's def one of my favourites
haruitonami chapter 35 . 3/9
Hello! I understand that this fic is on hiatus, but goddamn, it is truly a work of art. The characterisation and relationships are perfect, and the amount of times I have stopped and felt entirely in awe of this story and your writing is through the roof. It has me in love with DeiSaku all over again. Now I am off To find another DeiSaku to read, and feeling quite dampened with the knowing that its unlikely i'll find another fic as good as this one, I'm still entirely submerged in the story and doubt i'll be able to of it for a while. I have really fallen in love with your writing of the characters and story. I am also constantly amazed at how well you handle such a wide variety of points of view, how entirely realistic they all are, and at times how humorous!

I really hope you are well, healthy and happy. I humbly wait for the next update, whenever that may be. This story has truly blown me away (if you couldnt tell!) and more than anything, I want to see sakura develop, and her reunion with deidar, with all the complications that brings, all weaved together in thr magical way that you do.

Much love,
Haru xxxxx
Gigapode chapter 1 . 3/9
I'll be patiently awaiting the next part, whenever that may be. Hope you are well.
Watermelon Kity chapter 35 . 3/8
Hey,... I am one of your fans and I love your stories and I hope you are reading this...You are a human not a robot so I understand for the late have a life outside of this sister and I alwasy read your fanfic and we love on behalf on my sister I just want to say relax...you dont have to like you are beginer slowly write because you like it and because you are inspire by something and you share it to people so they can enjoy it my last words to you is relax...calm down...dont rush...ok?Oh and bye-bye
yourmainsqueeze chapter 35 . 3/7
I remember reading this story when it was first published. As a fan of both Sakura and Deidara, I was totally intrigued by the story's completely original concept. Back when this story was stalled at only a few chapters, I would, on occasion, come reread them all and imagine how awesome the Suna arc meeting between Sakura and Deidara would be in this story verse. Since the story stayed untouched for quite awhile, I figured I'd just have to be content with my own musings. Then you started updating again and it was pretty glorious. I've loved every chapter you've posted since the story's revival and I have to admit that my musings never came close to what you've written. Your development of Sakura is unparalleled (especially if we're talking Canon-Sakura) and your characterization and use of other characters has been on point. (I personally find Sakura's interactions with Kakashi and Itachi particularly noteworthy.)

I'm really sad to see this story go on hiatus. If you put the story on hiatus because you're busy, unwell, or just over writing it, that's your choice. However, if the story is on hiatus because of some people's responses to the story's direction, I would really like you to reconsider. I've loved the depth and subtly with which you've developed the story and I'd hate to see it go unfinished.
VixenOfMeiraz chapter 35 . 3/5
Awesome story, please update!
Della chapter 35 . 2/22
This story is just full of intrigue isn't it? I find your characterizations of everyone fascinating. I'm especially eager to see what Kakashi is going to say; exactly what did Ino reveal to him? Looking forward to reading more from you!
o Charlie x chapter 1 . 2/20
My god this story takes me to a different world. I love how you write with such detail, every time I read a chapter it leaves me wanting more.

It's unfortunate that you've put this store on hiatus, I has just re-read the latest chapter and have been patiently awaiting for an update.

Whatever you chose to do, I do hope you continue publishing such great stories. Regardless, I'll be eagerly awaiting a new chapter.

Thank you for the hours of adventure you've given me with your story.
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