Reviews for Expedient
Guest chapter 7 . 8/2
How come the chakra paper didn't work? Sakura has a water and earth affinity, why'd you remove it? Or is she going to find out about it later?
DecayedAsh chapter 1 . 1/17
waht the actual fuck, poor sakura because what the actual hell is that stupid old perverted man known as hokage thinking?
beanzhead chapter 41 . 4/21/2022
the hug and pressing their forheads together got me in the feels. FINALLY a decent reunion. hopefully they get at least one more reunion since there is just 11 chapters left
beanzhead chapter 34 . 4/20/2022
went from shipping sakura to deidara, teru, and now kakashi. patiently waiting for sakura and deidara to meet (while both are conscious lol) again
beanzhead chapter 19 . 4/19/2022
the fact that she still thinks of deidara as her sensei is so sweet I can't stand it. Also I haven't watched og naruto in so long but sasuke is exactly as annoying as I remember lol. you do such a great job at keeping them in character
boldlyshamelessland chapter 52 . 4/11/2022
I never thought about deisaku but this fic made melee them!

Also Teru's reaction to Temari where everything :)
Romantically Distant chapter 52 . 4/4/2022
This is utterly brilliant and I love what you’ve written in terms of character progression and how you tweaked canon events. It’s brilliant and thank you for writing it
PurpleKetloom chapter 52 . 12/14/2021
Aaahh pity it isn't finished, I binged this story pretty hard.
Panjason chapter 34 . 10/8/2021
Ok… there’s like zero sens of direction.
Had a lot of fun, but with such an aimless and goalless mc? Gonna have to bow out here. It’s a damn shame though. Had all the ingredients to be amazing.
Panjason chapter 31 . 10/8/2021
Ok… I would think Ninja would have a suiton way to neutralize things they drink or have in their system. Flushing a body of poison just takes time and lots of water so making a sped up equivalent with ninjutsu seems intuitive.
I suppose that would take the narrative tension though and also the matron might notice.
Panjason chapter 27 . 10/8/2021
I don’t get Danzou. Shouldn’t Sakura have learned at least a little healing before going. On paper she’s potentially a more lethal version of Tsunade with the cellular attacks hopped up on strength. It’d be hilarious for her to end up as a missing-nin and cause havoc, making his mistake that much worse.
Anitode chapter 7 . 9/6/2021
Smashy Smashy Tactics needs to be Jiraiya’s next book title lmao
Lady-Ye chapter 52 . 6/28/2021
A decade late but the Itaino chemistry is pure fire. I really really wish I got to know what happened and secretly I think Ino ran off with Itachi to the sunset!

Anyway, Thank you for the story and I really glad I stumbled upon this 'cause good Itaino fics are so bloody rare.
Zodiacren chapter 23 . 6/11/2021
This is really awesome. I love reading this. keep up the good work
mscrispy chapter 52 . 5/25/2021
I read your story ages ago, I'm pretty sure before you posted the after story chapters? But it was like reading it for the first time again and what a ride... I could barely sleep because I had to know what came next. An extremely well fleshed out story (tho I'm admittedly biased to Sakura and Deidara's pov - the beginning with Deidara training Sakura was hilarious, heartwarming, and ugh the feels. Everytime they almost reunited and when they finally did. I died. Real talk.) Wow. After all these years, I've come back to this story and I'm still blown away. It's been years since you updated and I know chances are slim and you've moved on to bigger and better things buuuut I'm still refollowing. Hopefully I won't have to just imagine Sakura's triumph over Oto and Deidara doing whatever he gonna do in Ame and their glorious, probably hilarious, hopefully not tragic reunion at the end of everything. Sighsss. Forever waiting for Deidara to find Sakura again.
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