Reviews for Pandora's Box
KrisXD chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
The italics are very distracting and disrupt my reading. I can't tell if they are thoughts or song lyrics and then when you bold things it makes even more difficult to decipher. Other than that the story is quite interesting
Kymmiigirl chapter 1 . 5/29/2010

This was absolutely beautiful.

I love your work. 3333
andrienne80 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Your best work ever. What more can I say. I dare say it outshine Narcotic. Really good. _
Baralineth chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
i love you. Oh my god. amazing. The angst is just oozing out of this story. I love it. Is there a happy ending? Please? Poor Draco and Harry all broken... i dont think I can stand it :]

Awesome job

Update soon!

netrixie chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
oh my lord

I hope you continue this soon. I'm sobbing from this. It was... lovely. And I agree with you- this is a fiercly wonderful fic.
ShuraShura chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
holy shit, tbc? seriously? o.o

ok wow, your stories are so(SO) well described, but not... annoyingly so... its like... amazing! its like over the balance but... ... not... xAx

every discription is a detailed and meaningul, i fking love it! /

i wasn't even in a fanfic mood

(fanfic overdose, remember? xP

i'm not even (that much) into harry and draco anymore but...

i saw it came from you and i was like...

well... she always writes fking amazing fics so...

thank you for rekindling the spark W

so much angst Dx

i hate angst.

i love this fic.

hope for a happy ending! c:

oh yeah.. i had like... 9 words i never even SEEN before.

... can i ask how ol-

oh my god...

you're 19...

thats like...

5 years older then me...

do you major in english or what? A

please tell me you do.

there is NO way you can write something this amazing with out SOME sort of ultra over the top special education.

oh dear god, i only hope i can write a quarter this good by the time i'm 20 lol 'w'

speaking of writing...

i'm writing my essay summitive in english, i so fail xAx

**couldn't get into flirt, i'm sorry Dx, but you have like 400 reviews there so i hope you don't miss me too much, haha :'D
Blaze chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
This was so vastly different from Flirt, it's almost astonishing. Once again, the amount of emotions put in is practically your trademark. I loved the mysterious beginning, the characterization of Draco, the brilliant imagery that's used, and it just might be me, but Harry Draco's dark mark was kinda hot.

As usual, I can't wait for the next chapter.
leiselmae chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
This is Beautiful! What a stunning portrayal of emotion. You are an amazing writer!
fattoad chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Just brilliant. I can't wait to read the 2nd part. :)
gingembre chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Woah. That right there is a beautiful piece of writing. I love the poetry and fluidity of the words. It lends the story some sort of ethereal quality that's oh so bittersweet. I love it. The juxtaposition of each boy as the other's antithesis is exquisite. Yet you manage to capture how- despite their violent disparity- they rely on each other and revel in the delicious thought of something forbidden.

Thank you so much. I CANNOT wait for the conclusion! The extra effort you put in to perfect this piece is undeniable. Great work.
sarah mcdonald chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Oh my goodness, this story is perfect. It's so beautifully written and filled with so much angst and love..argh it's simpy amazing!

i can't wait for the second half!
AlineDaryen chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
I don't know what to say, I'm aching all over right now. This is so intense! It bites and slithers, if you know what I mean. I always imagined a scene where Harry caresses Draco's Mark and kinda wanted to write it... well, there's no need anymore. Love your style as always, it's so gorgeously different and works for these terse, unchaptered pieces extremely well.

There are many things that could be said about this but words escape me. Can't wait for the next installment!
mjmusiclover chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
very incredible :D:D
collardog chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
OMG, WOW that was amazing, the story flowed and was simply breath-taking and didn't have anything wrong with it , well at least i thought that. Please make the second installment just as brilliant as that.
ActorPotter chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Oh my goodness. You know.. you know that as I read your stories I am just completely enthralled, and sometimes it just gets to be too much and I'm just saying out loud in my empty room "Oh god, Oh god. How can she write like this?" Everything is just.. so wonderfully... flawless and perfect. The emotions, the scene.. One of my friends told me that there are scenes in my novel that make him feel breathless. The entire time I read your 10,000 words in one sitting, I am breathless. I am staring at the scene, only moving to scroll down just a little bit more...People might think I am in some type of coma until something breaks me out of the trance and I take a big gulp of air. I love it, I love you, and I cannot wait for the next part :D 3ActorPotter
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