Reviews for The God's Gift
Fireheart03 chapter 12 . 7/13/2013
pls continue the story its rly gd
Sara lovelymusic chapter 3 . 11/18/2012
ow i just got in a fist fight with my sister over this dont ask how or why
Sara lovelymusic chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
well i was surching for the story 'Downsiders' and i ened up with this i LOVE it! yay!
Please chapter 12 . 9/27/2012
Please don't rewrite it I like it just how it is. Please update the whole time you had me hanging on to the edge wanting to go to the chapter as fast as I could so please update I really love the way it is right now.
lips-like-morphinee chapter 12 . 8/5/2012
I like the idea of this and it's really well written but...I just can't image percy as that type of god.
HateUsernames chapter 12 . 1/28/2012
Update soon please
ADHDkid-hans101 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
ive got an idea for anew character hans joseph lostlong son of poseidon everyone thinks hes dead and hes super powerful you can make up the age
goldenboy892007 chapter 11 . 12/26/2011
this is good though the whole god of pain and suffering thing sucks cuz i was expecting him to take pans said that you needed some ideas for writing and i have a couple for instance what if percy started to find a way to change his domain and become the god of the wild, the anchient laws say nothing about doing so exspecialy with unclaimed domains such as the wild, or perhaps even taking on another domain, witch would make him the god of pain, suffering, and wild with the added benifits, cuz lets face it this domain dosent fit percy at all in fact it sucks, what if percy were to eat another golden apple would it give him more godly powers cuz thats not explained either, i mean think about it, no other god has tried it because they are content with what they have but adviously percy is not any way keep up the good work and update asap
FaZe-Life chapter 12 . 10/25/2011
I like the story its pretty original keep it up :)
Guest chapter 3 . 10/10/2011
Good story.
Captain Kork chapter 12 . 8/16/2011
Whaddya mean you're gonna switch main characters? I like Percy like this...
MissingLink01 chapter 12 . 7/8/2011
Nice, go on..!


Empty Happiness chapter 12 . 7/7/2011
Crappy? We know who is freakishly modest! This story rocks, please update soon!
Tick Tock chapter 12 . 7/7/2011
I liked it. Sad your taking it down it's quite good.
The Queen of Valencia Torgue chapter 12 . 7/7/2011
WHAT? I am so confused. But I do think that you're being too hard on yourself. Your writing is good, it's just this plot that needs some work.
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