|Reviews for The Portal of Eternity|
| Duela Dent TJD chapter 18 . 7/23/2015
Hi, I really love this series, you really make all the characters so much like they are on the show and not all OOC, I hate it when there like that. And you're so imaginative with your story lines there so much like real episodes I love it! You're truly a great writer. This is my second time reading the series and I still love it!
| Duela Dent TJD chapter 18 . 7/23/2015
Hia! I wrote a review before k was logged on but I looked threw all the reviews and it wasn't there so apparently I didn't. Maybe I was hallucinating I don't know. Anywhos, I absolutely love your story it's amazing. Love it love it. Like ALL the characters are so like there characters on the show and not OOC at all like most stories are. Plus your plot lines are so imaginative, they could be real episodes, there so amazing. I just love your writing and everything about your stories. This is the second time I read this series and its still amazing. I normally don't read stories more than once. So yeah you're amazing, keep writing, and you should totally write real Doctor Who episodes. Bring Jack back into Doctor Who please? I miss him. Heh anyways a bunch of nonsense I can't remember and ta ta for now, off too the next story!
| Janethefantasylover chapter 18 . 4/19/2015
Your stories are just great! Your writing is perfect and your story is very elaborate.
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 17 . 5/30/2014
aww, the doctor is mad, and poor jack...
but I'm glad The Master and Tejana are okay. I wonder what they'll do...? travel?
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 14 . 5/30/2014
WHOA! Awesome, but oh noes, how're they gonna get out of this one!?
. awesome story :D
| Secretly-A-Fangirl chapter 18 . 1/17/2014
Another great story, now on to the next one!
| I'msorrymylove chapter 17 . 9/2/2013
Oh yes...she will lie in her bed.
| mericat chapter 4 . 6/21/2013
I enjoyed the interactions between the characters in this chapter. Does Tejana's different relationship to 11 reflect your disappointment in losing 10? Can't wait for the reappearance of the Master. Your stories certainly could be on the screen. They would make wonderful tv for the program.
| mericat chapter 3 . 6/21/2013
Love that you brought Captain Jack into the story. I have been so disappointed that so far (and probably forever) the good Captain has not been included in Eleven's story. He is one of my favorite characters, altho I feel that much of Torchwood's plotlines suffer from too many plot holes. I love Jack in the Doctor story line especially.
| RW chapter 18 . 3/14/2013
Well, I finished. And it's midnight. Off to bed I go. I'm going to regret this in the morning. I'm really bad at being a teenager. I haven't staid up all night on purpose for ages.
| RW chapter 16 . 3/14/2013
Alright, Alright. I forgive you for making me stay up late. Quickly becoming my favorite fanfiction writer ever. I think I'm going to go ahead and finish this one.
| RW chapter 14 . 3/14/2013
Still mad at you...
| RandomWriter chapter 13 . 3/14/2013
Darn it. I was going to go to bed after this chapter. Rude.
| Randomagain chapter 11 . 3/13/2013
Okay so I admit to tearing up in the past few chapters. *SOB* I really liked the moment The Doctor and Tejana had at the end of this chapter. I find it fitting that it's the eleventh chapter.
One thing I didn't mention before is that not only is the plot interesting, but the writing is brilliant. I envy you a bit. I can go on babbling for paragraphs with fancy word choices, but my plots are quite boring. The segment when she was in The Master's mind was very powerful. I'm glad there wasn't some big dramatic speech to bring him back. It was simple and effective, because we got a glimpse of The Master in his darkest hours. Brilliant, just brilliant.
| RandomWriter17 chapter 8 . 3/13/2013
I'm SO happy I found this story. The- I guess I'll call them villains -here are so interesting and unique. Can you please write an episode for the show? Seriously, someone get Moffat on this.
This and the story before it are really, really good. I also like how Tejana is just sorta there. There's no crazy explanation or rewriting of past events. It's a completely different timeline-universe-whatever- but the story isn't weighted down by it. *Claps*
Great story. :D