|Reviews for Broken|
| Gumokoa chapter 1 . 3/31
In my veeeery personal (and not reliable opinion), I believe that Light wasn't as OOC as you might think. Yes, it is way too OOC for KIRA GOD OF THE NEW WORLD! (Ehem), but not for Light/any-person-with-at-least-a-little-sanity-left. I was actually very sad to not see Light having a normal human reaction to HIS FATHER F CKING SHOOTING HIM AND THEN SHOOTING HIMSELF (almost) in the anime. My fan feelings have been fullfiled. Then again, I haven't read the manga so I wouldn't know if Light was THAT ooc, but I loved it.
Specially your style of writing. Ive seen amazing plots written in litteral blocks of uninterrupted text. It hurts my eyeballs to read stuff like that. I loooooved it
| mika chapter 1 . 3/26/2016
More I need more lots more please I need more its perfect and I need more of it
| Fayette Blu chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
I definitely agree with Tarshil. This is a very good attempt at exposing that weaker side of Light that we all know he has but never was explored as thoroughly as it could have been. Very good work!
| darkgarden88 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I totally love this fic! I don't feel like Light is out of character. Everyone has a breaking point, and Light just reached his. Tears fell out of my eyes, no joke! 3
| Bridgettalladega chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
This is was so great! You should write more like these, since there are hardly any out there! Thank you so much!
| amainage chapter 3 . 9/14/2010
This is very entertaining so far, I was cracking up at some parts.
| xchemx chapter 3 . 8/28/2010
I love this- Light and L are just so in character.
| Repeating October chapter 3 . 7/30/2010
This chapter seems a bit different from your other two- although all of them are quite interesting :) Can't wait to see where this goes
| leopard high in the mountains chapter 3 . 7/23/2010
This is really really good! You should continue! :)
| FraulineTraumer chapter 3 . 7/22/2010
sally forth huh I like it!
| MajorityRim chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
This is so awesome! I want to find you and give you a hug then glomp your re creations of Light and L. I love the fact that you've kept so true to L's real character and yet created such a diffrent person! I can't wait for more.
| leah3 chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
awwwww! L's just so cute in this chapter :)
| leah3 chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Love the story and love light. Its nice to see him not so perfect and unemotional. 3
| PlasmaControl chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
nya~ cute. Another good chapter that you have done here. Keep it up and hope you can get the next chapter up soon-ish at some time
| Vithian chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
Update! Oh how I adore this story! Fluff isn't too bad in moderate doses... My fluffmonster is named Gary, and he is fluffy.
Anyway, glad to see you back and writing, and I think there may have been a hint of plot in there... maybe... If you squint... hard...
Moving on, maybe there will be plot in the next chapter? One can never stop hoping!
I shall (im)patiently wait for an update!