Reviews for Broken
Gumokoa chapter 1 . 3/31
In my veeeery personal (and not reliable opinion), I believe that Light wasn't as OOC as you might think. Yes, it is way too OOC for KIRA GOD OF THE NEW WORLD! (Ehem), but not for Light/any-person-with-at-least-a-little-sanity-left. I was actually very sad to not see Light having a normal human reaction to HIS FATHER F CKING SHOOTING HIM AND THEN SHOOTING HIMSELF (almost) in the anime. My fan feelings have been fullfiled. Then again, I haven't read the manga so I wouldn't know if Light was THAT ooc, but I loved it.
Specially your style of writing. Ive seen amazing plots written in litteral blocks of uninterrupted text. It hurts my eyeballs to read stuff like that. I loooooved it
mika chapter 1 . 3/26/2016
More I need more lots more please I need more its perfect and I need more of it
Fayette Blu chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
I definitely agree with Tarshil. This is a very good attempt at exposing that weaker side of Light that we all know he has but never was explored as thoroughly as it could have been. Very good work!
darkgarden88 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I totally love this fic! I don't feel like Light is out of character. Everyone has a breaking point, and Light just reached his. Tears fell out of my eyes, no joke! 3
Bridgettalladega chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
This is was so great! You should write more like these, since there are hardly any out there! Thank you so much!
amainage chapter 3 . 9/14/2010
This is very entertaining so far, I was cracking up at some parts.
xchemx chapter 3 . 8/28/2010
I love this- Light and L are just so in character.

Great job~
Repeating October chapter 3 . 7/30/2010
This chapter seems a bit different from your other two- although all of them are quite interesting :) Can't wait to see where this goes
leopard high in the mountains chapter 3 . 7/23/2010
This is really really good! You should continue! :)
FraulineTraumer chapter 3 . 7/22/2010
sally forth huh I like it!
MajorityRim chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
This is so awesome! I want to find you and give you a hug then glomp your re creations of Light and L. I love the fact that you've kept so true to L's real character and yet created such a diffrent person! I can't wait for more.
leah3 chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
awwwww! L's just so cute in this chapter :)
leah3 chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Love the story and love light. Its nice to see him not so perfect and unemotional. 3
PlasmaControl chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
nya~ cute. Another good chapter that you have done here. Keep it up and hope you can get the next chapter up soon-ish at some time

Twi~
Vithian chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
Update! Oh how I adore this story! Fluff isn't too bad in moderate doses... My fluffmonster is named Gary, and he is fluffy.

Anyway, glad to see you back and writing, and I think there may have been a hint of plot in there... maybe... If you squint... hard...

Moving on, maybe there will be plot in the next chapter? One can never stop hoping!

I shall (im)patiently wait for an update!

~Vithian
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