|Reviews for Broken|
| Fayette Blu chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
I definitely agree with Tarshil. This is a very good attempt at exposing that weaker side of Light that we all know he has but never was explored as thoroughly as it could have been. Very good work!
| darkgarden88 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I totally love this fic! I don't feel like Light is out of character. Everyone has a breaking point, and Light just reached his. Tears fell out of my eyes, no joke! 3
| Bridgettalladega chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
This is was so great! You should write more like these, since there are hardly any out there! Thank you so much!
| amainage chapter 3 . 9/14/2010
This is very entertaining so far, I was cracking up at some parts.
| xchemx chapter 3 . 8/28/2010
I love this- Light and L are just so in character.
| Repeating October chapter 3 . 7/30/2010
This chapter seems a bit different from your other two- although all of them are quite interesting :) Can't wait to see where this goes
| leopard high in the mountains chapter 3 . 7/23/2010
This is really really good! You should continue! :)
| FraulineTraumer chapter 3 . 7/22/2010
sally forth huh I like it!
| MajorityRim chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
This is so awesome! I want to find you and give you a hug then glomp your re creations of Light and L. I love the fact that you've kept so true to L's real character and yet created such a diffrent person! I can't wait for more.
| leah3 chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
awwwww! L's just so cute in this chapter :)
| leah3 chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Love the story and love light. Its nice to see him not so perfect and unemotional. 3
| PlasmaControl chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
nya~ cute. Another good chapter that you have done here. Keep it up and hope you can get the next chapter up soon-ish at some time
| Vithian chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
Update! Oh how I adore this story! Fluff isn't too bad in moderate doses... My fluffmonster is named Gary, and he is fluffy.
Anyway, glad to see you back and writing, and I think there may have been a hint of plot in there... maybe... If you squint... hard...
Moving on, maybe there will be plot in the next chapter? One can never stop hoping!
I shall (im)patiently wait for an update!
| Laimielle chapter 3 . 7/12/2010
You always set me off on some wild analysis of L and Light. There are just so many undertones in everything you write, and I always walk away wondering about what all those exchanges between those two meant, because they're so complicated and I can only try to understand them.
I was really worried that Light was so tired he might drop L or something. Dx Light's excuse could be, "Sorry. I fell asleep standing up." But that would be okay, right? Because it's the intention that counts. He INTENDED to take L to bed. :D But fortunately they both made it. (:
Ahh, god, I love how innocently affectionate Light was being. Seemed like L was unnerved with it for a second, but he probably figured out that Light didn't have any ulterior motives and he relaxed.
I laughed at that bit about being Kira and a dragon. (Holy shit, just imagine. He'd make the most destructive super villain EVER.)
I loved this. :D I was really happy to see you'd updated. (I haven't really been exploring the archive lately and I desperately needed a Death Note fix. I'm just really not up to sifting through all the fics I don't care for to find a good one. I lucked out here.)
Loved the update. (:
| TheEndofTag chapter 3 . 7/12/2010
gosh, poor L...he must be very tired to not hear Light confess to being Kira...hahaha...althought it was funny what Light said right after that confession: "Coincidentally, I'm also a dragon"...hahahah...too funny...and also what Light said about Watari if he saw Light carrying L was jsut hilarious...hahaha...i am surprise that i don't see Watari rushing in with his gun..._~...aw that kiss to the forehead was just adroable...hope to see a update soon!