Reviews for Oh No He Didnt
Aj21yolo chapter 1 . 7/17
Why does everyone kill of chi chi
Gohan's Gurl12 chapter 17 . 4/15
The ending's cute. Love the the story. Hope you write more.
Mr.Son chapter 3 . 11/13/2014
Hi just to let you know it says " credit for eating cell". Not "beating cell"
Takeshi Takeuchi chapter 2 . 6/21/2014
Dude loved the whole vegeta-tude thing had me rolling on the floor
guest 123 chapter 3 . 4/19/2014
eating cell hahaha. did you mean BEATING cell? lol :D
Agent Carolina chapter 5 . 1/23/2014
Apart from quite poor grammar, punctuation and choice of words, there is one thing that is frustrating me with this story and I'm only five chapters in!
Why does everyone just start screaming at each other? Do you know how much attention that would draw to them? Videl and Erasa are shopping together in the mall and she starts screaming at her, for the slightest provocation. In the first chapter, Krillin asked a simple question. Bulma could have politely said "They shall be staying with me." But nope. She goes off her head at him. Sure Bulma has a temper, but come on.
Dr. 18 chapter 2 . 1/3/2014
Good luck with that Gohan. I'm preety sure you'll see them again in the future. *wink,wink,hint,hint,nudge,nudge* 3
Engel2092 chapter 17 . 12/18/2013
you're really good at writing these stories, thank you for them.
El0ndon chapter 17 . 7/10/2013
El0ndon chapter 8 . 7/10/2013
you took some of these lines from dragon ball yo movie! cool!
vegeta1230 chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
beastmode953 chapter 17 . 5/30/2013
I like happy endings. That's wassup
beastmode953 chapter 16 . 5/30/2013
He died? Wtf
beastmode953 chapter 15 . 5/30/2013
Wtf how'd videl get there so fast
beastmode953 chapter 14 . 5/30/2013
I say you leave them dead
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