Reviews for Unversed
RenesmeVivio chapter 1 . 8/13/2016
Cool idea
Jdkwinxgrl chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
oMg. tHaT waS liTerally amazing. I always love the concept of Sora having unversed, due to the fact they're always so cute, adorable and harmless. (Actually I first saw this concept in a fanfic with same name lol) BUT, TECHNICALLY, A Keyblade of Darkness can't... Okay, I wrote this thing on it awhile ago, and maybe now it'll be put to good use (keep in mind I wrote this without your fanfic specifically in mind):

So, there are two _main_ and _common_ ways of getting a keyblade;

1. Your born with the ability/the keyblade chooses you (sorta like Harry Potter and wands now that I'm thinking about it lol)
2. The keyblade inheritance ceremony, or Bequeathing, where somebody of the level of master who, already wields one, grants you the ability, by the keyblade accepting/approving of you and reciting:

_*"In your hand, take this Key. So long as you have the makings, then through this simple act of taking, its wielder you shall one day be. And you will find me, friend—no ocean will contain you then. No more borders around, or below, or above,"_*

and the last one caught me off guard a bit:

_*"so long as you champion the ones you love."*_

Usually, we associate "love" and the term “friend” with the light or good-side, the only exception of this would be an anti-villian, which, by definition, _"...a villain with heroic goals, personality traits, and/or virtues. Their desired ends are mostly good, but their means of getting there are evil..."_ (So like Axel and him wanting to get Roxas back, but wanting to "kill" Sora in order to do so) or anti-hero _"...a protagonist who has the opposite of most of the traditional attributes of a hero..."_ (I can kinda see Riku in KH2 as an example...) Both could be considered light, but aren't entirely white or entirely black on the black and white side of things. (#RoadToDawn )
In Kingdom Hearts 1, we know that Riku could not wield the keyblade at first, (Sora took it, it came back to Riku, then back to Sora, yadda yadda) and that was because he gave into the darkness and (I think) because he took the oath the wield a keyblade of the light and giving into someone who's title is "Ansem, The Bringer of _*DARKNESS*_" goes against the whole "light" thing.
To sum it up; this kinda stands to ground, if a keyblade wielder of the light gives you the power of the keyblade, you yourself must be on the side/power of light, and it stands to say if a keyblade wielder of the darkness gives you the power of the keyblade, you yourself must be on the side/power of darkness, not the light.

-EnD RaNt-

I'm not AGAINST the whole idea, I guess it's cool? But it just didn't sit right with me considering it goes against what I believe and is FACT about canon. I know, IT'S A FANFICTION, no need to be stressed XD

I'm kinda indifferent about the next one being Yaoi, since I'm not too excited about Gay porn as much as other people, but I've read up to Chapter 3 and it's good so far, so I think i'll just try to avoid the sex bits.

So, good fanfiction, keep up the good work. GOOOOO CUTTEEEE SORA UNVERSED! (I wish there were more Sora unversed fics, *sigh*)
kage kitsune no yami chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Wow, this was really good. :)
ProfessorofFiction chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
This is exactly what I've been looking for in a darker version of Kingdom Hearts...massive thumbs up! :D
Shiori Yomu chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Woah! This is cool!
AnjoRemix chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
sooo there's a sequel? *runs off to go read it*
xxxRoxenxxx chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Explain to me why I never read this before?

Sora's 'Unversed' was frickin'' adorable, and this idea is totally awesome!

Vanitas seriously has conflicting emotions lol, I like his self-discovery, he reaslises that it isn't so bad to have a snuggly Unversed after all lol. (Yeah guess who my fav character in this was...)

It was to cuuuute! I officially think Sora's Unversed needs a fic of it's own! Quite the pooky of adorable!

I'm off to wander through your other fics now mwaha

Karkalicious Homestuck chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Yay! That was a nuce story and i thought that the little unversed sora thing would glomp Vani )
Raberba girl chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
It was so adorable when Sora's Unversed was cuddling with Vanitas. Van was a jerk to kill it, though that was pretty in-character for him; I'm also glad that he got another one in the end.

Interesting idea, to have Van perform the ceremony on Sora.
youngwriter123 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
OMFG! I tots love this story- that is totally I mean. I still don't understand the whole Chinese part like is Xnobody translating everything you wrote into english? I think thats the case XD. Well anyway XnobodyXsomebodyX I love you for that! Wow, an amazingly cute story that I'm so glad I stumbled upon. I've never read a cute story in such a long time and I'm glad I've found one :D I really love how you explain this- oh and keep it interesting with such cool ideas! I really would have never be able to 1. Think of such cute dialogue & 2. Keep the story with this nice little ... -.- I can't think of the word. Darn, whatever I just LOVED it! God, I hope you write more!~ or if you finished it then I can't wait to read it. It just really sucks to wait :D

- youngwriter123
ToonyTwilight chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Great idea this was! I enjoyed reading this!
Inumaru12 chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Very interesting. :) I really liked it. Lol, BUNNY. XD

Ninja of Thunder chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
That was EPIC! I love Vanitas so much and the worst part is I could see this happening in the actual game. Then again maybe it did? I mean its not like the game went into detail about what exactly Vanitas did in his spare time. Maybe he did hang around Destiny Islands! The heresy thing just added to the epicness!
Hayles1 chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
This was a very interesting story to read. The ending of it and possible consequences of this scenario are quite intriguing to consider. The fact that you have a sequel is all the more brilliant.

The spelling and grammar used in your story- even if English is your second language, it is better than some who have it as their first. The layout is easy to follow, I could be picky and say to combine a few one-liners together to make a paragraph, but that would just be me trying to grasp something to try and improve on something that may not necessarily need improving.

Very good, and I hope to be able to enjoy more of your work!
The male writer chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Nic plot twist! I like the idea of Vanitas offering his keyblade to Sora ;) It would be cool if he'd learned some new power of Vanitas XD And oh my gosh, little Sora is just so cuuuute XD The little unversed from Sora is cute and the implications of Sora being his heir is damm amazing! Good job! XD Love the story! XD

Sequel? Please do a sequel!
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