Reviews for Blasphemous Rumours
theHuntgoeson chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Magnificently written. The way inconsequentialities chase one another through Chris's mind at the moment of crisis is so true to life (I like the fact that he sees the stars as he dies). I feel I know him better after reading this. And the ending, with his concern for Shaz, is terribly moving, especially that superb last line.
Ciara chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
this isn't a critique of the story (which is well written! :D)

but a comment re your note at the bottom re historical accuracy. You think it's set in the 60s; I agree, given the inclusion of police whistles which were phased-out during the 60s and totally gone by mid-70s. However, (and I could be totally wrong about this!), I can't remember if Chris HAD a gun in THAT scene, but I'd be surprised if he did as fire-arms are used by specialist police officers only, (currently called 'CO19 - armed response unit'), who would have been part of the Force for some time, not a 'rookie' PC...

...just a thought! :D
Dinny93 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
That was painfully lovely... I'm still crying slightly. Poor Chris. You really captured his innermost feelings of awkwardness and inadequacy and I just felt so sorry for him :( Very well done.


mastertkw chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
I couldn't really figure out when Chris died, but this is great poetic writing, something that can be best reflected (maybe in the cut 20 min) Well done! The historical inaccuracies can be forgiven, its more of Chris character that you've done well by writing it. (Like I've said this for every reviewed story, I would love to also receive reviews for my own fanfic, good or bad doesn't matter. Thanks)
Novindalf chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Wow, that was pretty heavy reading. Brilliantly handled though )