Reviews for You Ain't One Of Us Now
AbbyCade15 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Very nice. It had a nice rhyme scheme. And in your author's note, it wasn't Robert who shot Daryl. It was Jed. Good poem though.
GetUrJollies chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Yay! I'm the first review of the first Red Dawn fanfic!

Very good poem. It had a nice rhyme scheme and rhythm. Very nice flow and it had a central story line and I understood the whole thing (a lot of times when I read an amateur poem the story is jumping everywhere and I can hardly keep up!)But you're definitley not an amateur.

Good job!