|Reviews for Broken Promise|
| losermuch chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Woah! Twisted! BRUTAL! Love it!
| GaoGar chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
What a twisted story. It has full of misery in it. Such strong emotions can lead them in to tragedy and hate!
| YACCBS chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Even though NarutoxSakura is my fandom OTP, this fic is absolutely fantastic. Dark and twisted but still in-character, which makes the whole thing believable and just that much better. Very neat style with the reverse timeline, and that last line - "Everything would be wonderful" - really clinched it. Awesome work.
| Foxcomm chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
damn, she was lying to him for years... She wasn't sorry that he found out that way, only that he found out. It was unrealistic for him to make her keep that promise though. You can't just love someone.
| For Rates chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
this is a really good story D
interesting way you wrote it, backwards and all.
nice to see your still full of ideas and plit.
| Cavernasu chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
This was a really depressing fic. That said, it was also very good. I liked the way you started at the end and worked back to the beginning. I haven't seen many things written that way and it made it really enjoyable to read.
| St. Alicon chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
I very much enjoyed this take on story telling. You pulled it off quite well.
| Play4ever chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
A cool one shot. The reverse time line and showing us the motive was a nice angle.
| Esus927 chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
Very brutal. Nice story though.
| KnightX chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
the way its written, it reminds me of a movie, i can't quite place it...
| Xynth chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Ah, such a morbid deconstruction of every, "I'll love you forever," moment in history. It's always sickened me how so many authors finish with a storybook ending to their fics, even you on occasion. I've always thought that they were too unrealistic and unbelievable to appreciate them. An enjoyable, if dark, read.
| Heir of Rage chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
i love the way you wrote this! it kinda reminds me of the kill bill story line, ya know? with the ending first?
anyway, i love it!
...and sakura's still a bitch.
| fly chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
wow psycho-naruto ftw
LoL at fellow reviewers though. Naruto murders Sakura because of heartbreak and a broken kiddie-promise and she's the evil bitch? Oo
| Writing bunny chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I can't imagine Naruto doing that. Sakura though... sounds just like her.
| jediguru chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
damn...brutal (i always knew sakura was an evil bitch!)