Reviews for Konoha's BlackWinged Demon
ivan0061509 chapter 5 . 4/26
This was really good I can't for the next one
chris kidder chapter 5 . 3/17
keep on writing
Morgan AMV chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
Your sorta on the concept. You see the mind processes and thinks 35-48 thoughts a min. Although, that probably isn't completely accurate because you can train your mind to become stronger just like you can with your body. In so, that actually can be possible if one becomes smart enough.
Aurora Wesker - Dark Fox Lord chapter 3 . 12/5/2014
Alright I've seen enough of this crap so I'm done. Like I say to all canon lovers, shove this shit right back up your ass where it belongs.

Canon and Kishimoto loving prick.
Findarato chapter 3 . 9/8/2014
You didn't even tell if you are in hiatus or if you've quit.
Queen of the Demon Rabbits chapter 5 . 8/22/2014
I like this story so far, I didn't expect it to be any good because stories like this usually aren't, but this is good so far. Please continue when you can
Darkus Cyril chapter 5 . 4/9/2014
Cool story, update it soon, I', definitely interested to see how this turns out
nemikconi new sora chapter 5 . 4/1/2014
when are you going to update the story
Aurora Wesker - Dark Fox Lord chapter 2 . 3/18/2014
Tch, just another bunch of Kishimoto ass kissing. For you damn canon lovers I honestly hope that fucker dies and soon.
candy4beth chapter 5 . 2/13/2014
are you going to update this or put it up for adoption
PCheshire chapter 4 . 9/28/2013
as long as this doesn't become incest(I'm hoping for slash though) it's good
roger9481 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
what the fuck kind of shit did I almost read, did you fail to know that he could be trained by them using a Kage bushin, if he's so smart than he should know that
ThisHasBeenLost chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Are you American? Because if so, you're Grammar needs work. Worriers is not the correct word for the Sentence "He told a story about worriers that used swords that were made of their own soul and that each had its own power that the user could use, that is after you learned the swords name. It did not say much about them after that, other than their enemies that they fought, were something called Hollows. The worriers-" This is incorrect, it should be warriors instead. I don't think that Shinigami and their history could be learned in a book, another thing is that why is Ulquiorra so over-powered? He shouldn't be able to tie the Gobi, even though the Gobi isn't really a Bijuu for fighting. Minato wouldn't wrap his arms around Kushina's waist. The whole, you're appearance will change thing is stupid, his apparence doesn't need to be changed, hopefully when you change it, it will be a reasonable change. Like not making all the Woman get wet and act like horny teens. Because that's stupid. I'll see this through, though.
yuri43 chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
please update if the story is not forgoten...puff
Slytherin Studios chapter 5 . 5/25/2013
I love your story, please update soon.
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