|Reviews for The Brandons|
| smook chapter 1 . 4/1
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| Mxpi1970 chapter 22 . 1/14
Well missus, have to hand it to you...I noticed this chapter in my emails and of course, due to ill health and writing it's been a while since I last had a read, due to my curiosity I had to start at chapter 1 of this story and read it all the way through, appreciating it all again once more...That's saying something if I can read a story more than one...As usual my dear you paint with words and your story is as gripping as the first time I read it. If it were to ever get to be printed then know for sure that the paperbacks would be dog eared. Have now been sucked back into this world once more because of you. I was trying today to explain what your books were like and said that characters that SM dropped casually in and just as casually out that you've created a far better and interesting and exciting world than the original and that I wish I had read your stories first. However this is the only version of the books that i'll read over and over again :D Thanks as always for your chapter, Love how Jasper is starting to finally feel at peace with himself. Dying to read more of MH. Sorry you've been so ill hun and when is your hubby gonna write a new chapter? hmmmmm
Anyway, take care, :D Marie xxx
| Janiriki chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
Pig riding ... what a hoot!
Hunting in your undies ... even funnier.
Smeagol would starve ;-)
| bmthespian chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
Great chapter. Hope you feel better soon.
| dazzleglo chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
This was excellent. Jasper found himself after all these years. LOL Bella riding the pig.
| favludo chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
Awesome chapter! So lovely to be able to read more of this story; I really adore Jasper and Alice stories so thanks for writing and posting :)
| deltagirl74 chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
That was great! I will say that I can't imagine Jasper being ok with Edward seeing Alice without any clothes, I don't care how often they hunt together. I hope you update soon.
| k1942 chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
I'm so sorry you are sick with strep, that really hurts! Flip side, I'm tickled you gave us an update! It was fun to catch up with Bella, Edward, Alice and Jasper, and the pig hunt was hilarious! Scared Edward half to death when Bella hit that tree, but calmed when assured she and Ren were okay! Thanks for another side of the great dog cleanup, just about the worst thing Renee ever did! Take good care of yourself and get well, have a wonderful Christmas and happy new year! See you next time!
| ohtobeyoung chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
Great chapter my friend. Sorry you are sick. I'm still trying to find my missing music so I am afraid Christmas CD won't be happening this year. Have a Wonderful Christmas. Love you.
| Camilla10 chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
Hi dear, liked the chapter, Some politics is coming back in the story, right? And it is interesting how the realationship between Jasper and Edward develops.
| mousekemom chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
Wahoo! An update! I can't wait to rub it in hubby's face that I got to it first! Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us and I look forward to more of the UE updates!
| JLS0823 chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
Wonderful chapter! I loved the part about where Jasper is talking about Edward when... he thinks about how it should be and makes it happen. I love that. I wish everyone would have that attitude!
Hope you start feeling better and have a happy holiday season! Thanks for the chapter!
| Tinshaw chapter 21 . 7/31/2013
Hello, all your work related to this story is just awesome. A very heart felt thank you.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
You kwon if Cynthia was born in 1908, Alice will be seven years older then Cynthia because Alice was born in the year 1901 same as Edward
| Just Mione chapter 21 . 7/8/2013
I love reading from their point of view, gives a whole new dimension to the story!