Reviews for Betrayal
Anonymously Gorgeous chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
Update soon
Aye Dios Mio chapter 2 . 11/15/2011
Gosh I liked David-Micheal but this is creepy. Even tho Logan & David-Micheal's relationship is consensual it is messed up. It will be illegal in a year if it isn't already. And it could become abusive, Logan pressures David-Micheal into doing disgusting things. The disgusting thing is Logan's 17 & David-Micheal is 12. It's sad the only story with David-Micheal is this one.
warriorcrazy chapter 2 . 9/15/2010
Nice! xD
prettybutterfly99 chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
Wow Mary-Anne is a bitch I'm not sure if I should be rotting for david-michael and logan but this story sue is intretsing
revbev353 chapter 2 . 9/8/2010
Great chapter, athlouring Logan is being kinda mean :(
XXXMystery chapter 2 . 9/7/2010
The wait was-and still is- worth it! I love this! Logan is so controlling and how he treats David Michael is that kind of loving/cruel way that I can't ever do well. And foreshadoing is like the cherry otop ofn the sundae of storytelling. It's irresistable and makes everything better! I will suffer in silence under the next chapter is out. ;) I'll be on the lookout for the next chapter! :)
XXXMystery chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
I actually liked this. And, via wikipedia, this seems pretty accurate to me. I like how Logan's possessive nature is hinted at without being fully expressed. I can't wait for more!

P.S. I have NEVER read BSC, so I just did a quick read of its wikipedia page in order to read your story!

P.S.S. Call me sick, but In don't really count fictional relationships between adults and kids as long as the kids in question have at least reached puberty. However, depending on the story, prepubescent is okay, too.
revbev353 chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
A 17 year old with a 12 year old? thats sick alright, but whatever :P