Reviews for A Butterfly Effect
dragonryder2 chapter 5 . 9/20
while loosly based on the short story by R. Bradberry, the movie Sound Of Thunder was in No Way as good as the story. enjoyed your story very much. thank you
Guest chapter 14 . 9/3
London Knight .
Very interesting Chapter - reading between the lines , there's a lot going on here .
Oh and it's the 21st Century , so no one should question you on your sexuality etc , but well done for standing forward & stating it .
A vast majority if my female friends & Girlfriends aged 35 & under consider themselves bi . Might be a bit different in North America but London is incredibly liberal in this regard :-)
LK out .
Guest chapter 11 . 8/12
London Knight .
Very good last few Chapters . One quibble :
Not really in Madame Pomfrey's character to call ANY pupil 'Dearey' ... AND I doubt any BRITISH KID would call her Ma'am in return ?
Only person that gets called "Ma'am' ( pronounced "Marm" to rhythm with harm ) is the Queen ...

On another note , absolutely nothing wrong with two Twelve year old Girls falling in love . Two of my female best friends fell for each other at around that age & are still together 15 years later . One sees Guys now & again , bit their 'arrangement' is far stronger than most marriages I've known ... 21st Century flexibility & each to their own & all that . I'm extremely Liberal , and I know not all would agree , but you really can't help what age you fall in love - My late Father's Half Sister fell for her husband in the 1950's aged 14 to his 20 ( legal in their Country ) & are STILL together almost 60 years later . Parents , Grandparents & now Great-Grandparents ...
LK out .
Guest chapter 8 . 7/28
London Knight .
Oh dear ... NEVER 'sidewalk' in the UK ! It's PAVEMENT or 'the pavement' .

Also never trashcans ( or garbage pails ... ) in the UK ! Dustbins OR Rubbish Bins ...
Guest chapter 5 . 7/23
London Knight .
Err ... at this point in the Timeline , Viktor Krum is 13 and wouldn't be well known as a Quidditch player . Pansy wouldn't have know about him ...
LK out .
Guest chapter 3 . 7/22
London Knight .
Very nice Chapter & loved the introduction of Ginny . One turn of phrase though - "Just eat it already!" - would never be used by a British Kid ... or Adult for that matter ...
Still you got the 'MUM' instead of 'Mom' bit right , so there is hope for you yet ! X-D
LK out .
Guest chapter 2 . 7/22
London Knight .
Heh very amusing . Couple of points : Dudley's Birthday is June 23rd , but as this was started before it was posted on Potter more it's easily adjusted . Petunia does state in HBP that Dudders is a month older than Harry though .
Also no Dolphins in any British Zoo's in 1991 or now - and certainly not London Zoo . Windsor Safari Park had Dolphins & a Killer Whale in the 1980's but they were phased out as cruel in the '90's I think ?
As said minor things . Onto the next Chapter ... LK out .
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21
London Knight .
Not bad so far . A few inconsistencies crop up : 50 MILE Anti Apparition Wards rather than 80 Kilometers - Wizards & Pure Bloods in particular would still use Imperial Measurements ?
Extremely few Houses in the UK have Pickett Fences ...
And NEVER EVER is the term 'Pinkie' used in the UK ! It is LITTLE FINGER ...
Still nice to see Prongs got 'stuck into' old Mouldy Pants ! X-D
LK out .
Carre chapter 28 . 7/15
Hope you will be better.
Hope you will finish this story becuse, by Beard of God, this is one of the best storys I have read and seeing the end of this chapter and this story (look like) unfinished after roughly 4 years...
(Can you a least tell us you are alive, at least?)
Hope you will return and if you do, Keep up the Good Work (Thumbs Up!).
Carre chapter 6 . 7/7
One of the finest chaphers I have read.
Both laughed and nearly cried.
Keep up the good work (thumbs up!).
ceasare chapter 4 . 6/15
how did the story decent to this? it's like tge first couple of vhapter were written by somebody else
Aeroza chapter 28 . 6/5
Whoever is the previous guest, I agree, it is one if the few best stories I read and hope to continue reading. Please make more.
Guest chapter 28 . 5/19
This is definitely the best genderswap fanfiction I've ever read, and one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions I read period. The writing is pretty good, it manages to be very visual, and the surreal touches you gave the story in the CoS chapters were surprisingly original and even touching.

And on the characters, I love how do you write Ron! Many writers tend to overreact his goofiness and/or bad tempered while downplaying strenghts, but yours is both flawed as well a intelligent, good I believe you even improved her from cannon, where we barely got to know anything of her, but here, since Harry meets her early, her characterization is far more solid, even if she should start realizing her feelings for Harry XD. And talking about them, maybe you'll like to know that you made me a G/H (or at least G/fem!H) shipper :p. As for Harry, though I was at first worrying about she becoming a Mary Sue (and, if you keep on writing this, I would recomend for you to write her a bit more of little flaws like, say, she having a hard time on Transfigurations class) from about the second half of the fic I felt your writing of her in that respect got much better, specially for the way you introduced earlier her connections with Voldemort's horrocrux and dark magic, something that we didin't get to see enough with Canon Harry IMO. Other than that though, I like that Harriet is both very much Harry as well as her own character, which keeps the story from be a repetition of the books or a OoC fest.
So thanks for writing this great fanfic, even if it's incomplete I enjoyed very much reading it, and I hope you are doing great :) (And sorry for any grammar errors in this review, english is not my native language, and this is probably one of the longest thing I wrote on it :p)
Aeroza chapter 1 . 5/16
Well, I disagree with dobrevax. I like this story. I bet Ginny and Harriet are soulmates; soul-bound mates? Good reading so far.
dobrevax chapter 5 . 4/2
Some constructive feedback :)
I dont like the aspect that 11 year olds are having so many "romantic" thoughts, and some characters seemed a little bit too AU, concidering that you havent marked this AU.
Harry also seems a tad too powerful.
This fic seems a lot like a super!harry fic I would have read when i started reading fanfic and liked to read the harrys a almighty powerful god etc fics.
But i only read the first 5 chapters and dont know if it got better, so im wishing you luck if you decide to continue writing someday :)
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