|Reviews for A Butterfly Effect|
| Draugrim chapter 28 . 6/3
Thank you for this gift.
I hope you're okay. It's been too many years and you likely don't even have alerts for this, but I really do hold out hope.
| monkey's ninja chapter 28 . 4/25
After re-reading this story for the third time in 6 or so years, I'm finally breaking down to ask...how are you? Is everything alright? If you are having further health issues, then i wish you all the best in recovery! If you're suffering from writers block or apathy etc. then I strongly encourage you to keep writing. This story needs to be told. Your plot outlines are spectacular and thought provoking, your character development is obsessively amazing and balances character strengths and weaknesses, human extraordinary and human flaw. I think the majority of people reading your story would agree with me that you are fucking talented and you should keep writing to keep us out of the psyche ward for the inevitable breakdown that would happen is this story doesn't finish. We believe in you! You are awesome!
| Ryo Oh Ki7 chapter 28 . 4/22
A WONDERFUL story, completely enthralling.
| Kawaru86 chapter 26 . 12/31/2017
Since i cant double post in the last chapter. Looks around sadly, still desperately hoping for more, and hopes your well. Long live Femslash!
| Yolodysseus chapter 18 . 12/13/2017
I was just... admiring her bum.
That's right! It was just bum envy."
The heteronormativity hurts my poor bisexual soul.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2017
| Werebane chapter 28 . 11/3/2017
You know, I still check this fanfic every now and then; even though it hasn't been updated in four years. It's my favourite fanfic of all time, to be honest, so I guess I'm still holding onto hope for it after all.
Anyway, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this the first time, back when it was still updating, and all the other times after that. There's no other fanfic quite like it out there.
| Blinked310 chapter 28 . 10/26/2017
Great story! I've really enjoyed the changes from the butterfly effect and the reasons for each one. I did think that the end of Chamber of Secrets got too convoluted and I was taken out of the story a bit because of the overwhelming amount of suffering the main characters went through, particularly Ginny - too many horrific experiences so close together in a story lessens the impact of each individual instance, I feel. That being said, I have overall really enjoyed reading this story, I feel invested in each of the characters, and I'm very curious as to where you planned on going with each of the plot lines, because so far it has been quite engaging. So, regardless of whether or not you come back to this story (and I hope you do, because I was quite disappointed to find myself on the last chapter), good job! If you do come back, I look forward to reading more!
| Polly Little chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
They're acting rather unusual for eleven year olds
| Polly Little chapter 4 . 10/19/2017
Thank you, thank you, a thousand times thank you for writing Ron correctly
| Polly Little chapter 1 . 10/19/2017
The amount of detail you have was brilliant. It is cute. Very cute, and I'm stealing the Monkey Candy recipe.
| dragonryder2 chapter 5 . 9/20/2017
while loosly based on the short story by R. Bradberry, the movie Sound Of Thunder was in No Way as good as the story. enjoyed your story very much. thank you
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/3/2017
London Knight .
Very interesting Chapter - reading between the lines , there's a lot going on here .
Oh and it's the 21st Century , so no one should question you on your sexuality etc , but well done for standing forward & stating it .
A vast majority if my female friends & Girlfriends aged 35 & under consider themselves bi . Might be a bit different in North America but London is incredibly liberal in this regard :-)
LK out .
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/12/2017
London Knight .
Very good last few Chapters . One quibble :
Not really in Madame Pomfrey's character to call ANY pupil 'Dearey' ... AND I doubt any BRITISH KID would call her Ma'am in return ?
Only person that gets called "Ma'am' ( pronounced "Marm" to rhythm with harm ) is the Queen ...
On another note , absolutely nothing wrong with two Twelve year old Girls falling in love . Two of my female best friends fell for each other at around that age & are still together 15 years later . One sees Guys now & again , bit their 'arrangement' is far stronger than most marriages I've known ... 21st Century flexibility & each to their own & all that . I'm extremely Liberal , and I know not all would agree , but you really can't help what age you fall in love - My late Father's Half Sister fell for her husband in the 1950's aged 14 to his 20 ( legal in their Country ) & are STILL together almost 60 years later . Parents , Grandparents & now Great-Grandparents ...
LK out .
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/28/2017
London Knight .
Oh dear ... NEVER 'sidewalk' in the UK ! It's PAVEMENT or 'the pavement' .
Also never trashcans ( or garbage pails ... ) in the UK ! Dustbins OR Rubbish Bins ...