That was good.

This, I like. I really like. It's subtle and tasteful. But I think it was just a little too short. Other than that, it was great!

Once again, I applaud your skills in writing. The descriptions are wonderful, and the story flows like a calm river, with your unique literary voice ever present during. The situation is handled well, particularly since it involves Rikku AND Yuna - something I have a hard time with. And with the addition of Lulu into the fray, it only succeeds in portraying your skill as a writer. They were all quite in character, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Well done!

Nice job, very nice job. I love the contrasting between Rikku and Lulu. I gotta hand it to you, it's hard to have smut AND sound eloquent when writing a story, but you do it so well here. )

I'm so pleased you've gotten drawn (back) to writing these three. It's exactly the right dynamic.

Pleasant and IC and cuddly (Yuna is such an innocent, sweetly so).