Reviews for Broken for the Best
Guest chapter 2 . 2/28/2016
It's spelt sharingan, so you got really close. Just a letter off! w
klarissa.pereda chapter 2 . 11/1/2012
Hahaha, i like this athor u must go crazy on holowen. :3
chobits909 chapter 2 . 10/15/2010
gaah update please! i love time travel fics. especially when naruto is all cold and awesome like he is here. XD pweeese?
dee chapter 2 . 10/13/2010
please please please update as soon as you can, love the story so far and i don't care what the other reviews say it is an original twist and an interesting one to
Meresdreams chapter 2 . 10/10/2010
interesting so far was bummed there wasn't another chapter, any chance of this being updated?
Dakuenjeru chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
Please try to update this as sson as possible
InARealPickle chapter 2 . 6/16/2010
I'm sorry, but I have to agree with your first reviewer.

Naruto was just murdered by his village and he's p*ssed.

Why the hell would he decide to become a genin again when he wakes up in the past?

Then to make matters worse, in this chapter you had him contemplating moving to Suna.

But it's too late for that because now he's a Konoha Shinobi.

He can't leave without them tracking him down and killing him.

And even if he did run away, he couldn't go to Suna. Suna is allied with Konoha. They'd turn him over straight away.

Also, you can't spell very well.

You especially have trouble with homophones such as

They're, Their, There, Your, and You're.

You also never spell tired correctly and wrote color when you meant collar.

So yeah, the spelling kind of sucks.
FaithlessSinner chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Interesting...but I have to say, it's needs a little bit more originality to it. It was a very god start though, hope you update soon!
web chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
I've never understood this. Naruto goes back in time because the Villagers kill him, he doesn't love Konoha anymore, he arrives before the genin exam and yet he still goes through with the exam becoming a ninja and tying himself to the village for life. Now he can't leave or he would be counted as a missing-nin. Why did he go through with the test, its not like he needs the training.


So far, the story is fairly typical of the time travel Naruto. Hopefully the next few chapters will be more orriginal. But you have a good start here. Keep it up!