Very original idea. i've never seen a story like this! I can't wait for the next chapter, thank you so much for posting!

Your story is very amusing and I enjoyed reading it. Chatter kind of reminds me of Wheelie from trans 2. Night Watch sounds like a mix between Optimus and IronHide. Keep up the good work.

You know, normally I ignore these crosses, but for some reason I read this and loved it. Good job so far, can't wait to see where you go with this. I assume the Transformers if the movie version?

~ErikArden

Well this is interesting . . .

Chatter reminds me of Blur, and maybe Rumble and Frenzy. And I'm guessing that Night Watch is a combo of Prowl and Red Alert?

What's next?

oh my mother earth! I love Chatter! So cute! Night Watch is cool to! Still like Chatter, Cloud. Is Harry going to create more "children"?

This is really good. I like Chatter, he reminds me of some of my friends

I love it! I haven't read such a good Transformer/Harry Potter story in a long time. And I've read alot of them. I can't wait till it's updated! Keep up with the awesome work! :)

I see Night Watch being like Red Alert and Prowl. And Chatter to me is like Blurr or Bluestreak.

you so have to write more. this is a great story. i will be awaiting on beated breath for more of the story. thank you for writing so far. please do add more soon. please, pretty please.

Excellent story. I greatly enjoyed reading it.

Are Chatter and Night Watch going to get anymore siblings? Is Harry going to make himself a wife?

Awsome! update soon)

I like the idea)

I have a suggestion for a transformer, one I based on a car my family once owned, man I loved that car, too bad it got trashed... I do not remember what kind of car it was, though I am pretty sure it was a volvo, a dark cherry red volvo.

Name: Land Strider

Purpose: Surveillance, Geographic Layouts, Espionage, Information Networking and Long Range Sniping.

Weapons: 1x MANA, Magical Anti Neutron Assault, Sniper, made from the two front tires and the axle of the tires connecting them, can fire a single piercing beam of magical energy or a single sphere of built up energy, slower then the beam ,but if fired on it with the beam it will explode into a controlled explosion of arcane energies.

2x MANA Burst Blasters, two blasters put into the hands of the mechanoid, fires ball shaped bursts of magical fire, can be used as flamethrowers.

Gear: Communication Arrays, Spy Gears, Radars, Echo Radar Systems and etc.

Personality: A feminine robot who thinks of herself as the caretaker of the group, she mothers Harry and scolds the others when they act rash, but cannot find herself to speak ill of Harry when trying to scold him for being careless.

Fantastic story idea. I hope beyond hope that you continue this story. As for Night Watch, He seams to be a combo of Red Alert and Prowl. Is Harry going to make his version of Optimus Prime? Keep up the good work and thanks for taking the time to write for us Transformer fans.

This is great! I love Chatter and I hope you'll continue.