Reviews for Vigil
Inuyashagirl7692 chapter 23 . 3/22
After reading the chapter before this, I realized I actually could not go to sleep without reading about them making up. Not all of the feelings I get from this are pleasant and that makes reading kind of hard at times but I think that's just the time of story this is. Healing isn't easy and neither are the stories about it. This is really good, though. Especially when Raph was misunderstood and then ended up apologizing. Really, his pov is so wonderful. Wait… does this mean he's my favorite character? When did that happen? B-but Mikey's been my favorite character for twelve years! *cries*
Unseen Watcher chapter 37 . 9/23/2014
Awesome fic. A very in depth what if. It shows what a crisis can do to shape character and family dynamics. All I can think to say to Raph is, what would he say if one of his brothers was in his position? Especially Leo?
Anyway, great!
Anne Redwood chapter 16 . 6/16/2014
It's a bit confusing when you suddenly change point of view. You might want to consider utting something in to warn the reader.

I'm really like the story so far. :)
Anne Redwood chapter 5 . 6/16/2014
I think you captured Raph's personality well.
Juanita27 chapter 37 . 2/25/2014
Wow, the character development in raph and Leo, and the emotion in this story is great. Will keep my eye out for the sequel. Splinter needs saving! ;)-
ilovecartoonsgirl chapter 37 . 1/31/2014
you ended right there? agh! Well, at least there's a sequel. I like the raw emotion in this and can't wait to read the sequel.
Tori657 chapter 37 . 1/9/2014
This was your last chapter :'( but they were getting so close to finding splinter...
SleepingSeeker chapter 37 . 1/9/2014
You have to love April and Raphael. I dunno, ship them or not, there was always some spark between them. Whether you call it an uncanny understanding or just the stubborn woman's way around the hot-headed mutant, there is something special between the two of them. :D I can't wait to check out the sequel to this. I'm so glad you're continuing it. I'm so happy to have gotten the chance to spend my day reading this fabulous story. You did a great job with the characters and made my heart melt and hurt more than a few times over the course of chapters. I love your writing and hope to see much more of it in the future. Consider you not only on my fav list, but hopefully as a fellow fan and writer and friend.

Until then, see you in another story!
SleepingSeeker chapter 33 . 1/9/2014
Oh, man, I loved that last paragraph. Leo is under so much stress and pressure, the others have no idea what he has to shoulder - even their own expectations of him - to remain their shield, their rock and never to crumble or show weakness - but he is mortal as are they. And the unfairness of what he shoulders is staggering.
SleepingSeeker chapter 31 . 1/9/2014
Those last retorts so expertly rendered! God, I love this fic!
SleepingSeeker chapter 27 . 1/9/2014
They are just destined to continually hurt each other. No matter what their intentions or motivations initially are. :(
SleepingSeeker chapter 26 . 1/9/2014
Raph just has to lash out at his brother, he just doesn't know how to express himself without being cruel. Gah, I understand more than anyone.
SleepingSeeker chapter 24 . 1/9/2014
Oh, if only he wasn't so damn proud to speak of the love in his heart...why do some men act like this?
SleepingSeeker chapter 22 . 1/9/2014
That was handled extremely well! Yes! Leonardo, big brother, finally talking some sense into Mikey!
SleepingSeeker chapter 21 . 1/9/2014
Aw!
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