|Reviews for Adamo|
| Kelevra chapter 32 . 3/8
The hole series of documents was almost perfect. Somehow i wonder why all of these text arent retouched and transform into an oficial novel. I enjoyed them even not written on my mother tongue. I understand and apreciate the Tali's based core, but i would add some touch of secondary characters, that seem more important in those later fragments. I don't kwon if these text are still being publicated, but i encourage you to do so. Excuse my malfunctional use of your language.
Thanks for decide to write this story, make me feel playing a new game.
| Tomon chapter 1 . 2/28
I once again reread this story. It's so long from the last update and even your note in author profile. But I still hope that one day it will happen and you will come back. This story deserve it as one of the best in the whole ME fandom.
You're really talented and I would love to see how it continues :)
| Loleroler chapter 1 . 2/24
I just finished to read the last chapter. it was and is a awesome story, sometimes it already made me cry, other times it made me laugh. But im so sad now that this seems to be the last chapter :(
Please continue the story, i want so much to see (read) how Shepard and Tali get married, i want to see how the quarians get their homeworld back. And i want so much to see how Shepherd and Tali love each other.
I hope that you decide to write a new chapter of this story.
Please do it !
| Jack chapter 32 . 2/8
Hello Andrio it's me Jack I just want to know abort you Mass Effect story Adamo when are you going to make a update with it I just love your story I really really do and i hope you don's give it up please! your fan Jack
| Way of the Sheikah chapter 32 . 2/5
Man, such a shame that you chose to discontinue this story. I can understand how life often gets in the way along with other issues like lack of inspiration and such. But damn, this was a phenomenal story! I really liked your personification of Tali in this, and your Shepard is enjoyable to follow as well. Some of the other characters seemed glossed over while you were in-canon. Usually that bothers me a bit, but here it was fine, especially since you followed canon, meaning so long as we played the games, we all know what happens. I also liked how you incorporated some of your earlier short story/one-shots into this fic; it made it seem like those were merely tests for this story. It was brilliantly written, and I loved the material you created after ME2 (some of which, I actually wished happened in canon instead of ME3). It reminded me a bit of Calinstal's work, minus the unique take he had on quarian culture and customs.
I'm glad you didn't end on a cliffhanger, but all the same I wish I could have seen what ultimately happened. But regardless, you should be very proud of what you've accomplished here. You're a talented writer, and I hope that wherever you are right you, you are still putting that talent to good use. I'll put this on my alert just in case you decide to return someday. Thank you for an amazing read!
| buttman chapter 32 . 1/6
Are you going to make another chapter or is this it
| McDouggal chapter 32 . 12/17/2013
Gosh darn it, LIVE! Or maybe you put up a sequel?
I think I have an unhealthy obsession with Tali...
| KingN7 chapter 32 . 12/16/2013
Andrio-you are amazing. This is one of the best stories I've ever read on FF! :D It inspired me to write, though I'm definitely not as good as you! :) If you ever want to continue this, you've got my support and the support of any Talimancer around! I really want to know how the Quarians get their homeworld back, and I really want to see more Shepard and Tali! :D
But if you don't return, then I thank you for this gem! You made an amazing story that is truly a work of art!
Thank you, and Keelah Se'lai!
| AfterLyfe chapter 32 . 11/3/2013
I realize it has been a while since you have updated but I would love to read this story through to the end. Despite the third game being already released, that is the beauty of fanfic you can make it anything you want. Im you have done a great job thus far and I really enjoy your writing style. Warm regards, AfterLyfe
| Reko-Luna chapter 32 . 10/23/2013
Are you dead?
| Darman Sejuk chapter 32 . 10/10/2013
Is this story among the dead?
| thomson grove chapter 31 . 9/30/2013
that was truly a crowning moment of awesome.
| Prof. Omnom chapter 32 . 9/23/2013
On a scale of 1 to the Communist Sphere, how dead is this fic?
| Madgormley chapter 32 . 8/31/2013
Excellent story i really you continue this
| TimeTravlnDEMON chapter 32 . 7/27/2013
It sucks that it looks like this is pretty much dead, because this is fantastic. I'm actually a little annoyed that this chapter is out, because the end of Chapter 31 would have been a perfect ending. Now, I need to know how the Quarians get Rannoch back! Curse you :P