Reviews for Before You
Sandiego Martinez chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I liked the were a few grammatical errors but still good.
ImCutePoison chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Oh, thank you so much for the story and even more for the end. I like that song too. ]
Lunetaylina chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
It was soooo cute. Just the thing i need to read while on the road. Im reviewing over my phone excuse misspellings. I loved it.
lavlilac chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
aaaw, it's cute. I do wish it was a longer story cause it's well written and the plot is interesting.

Anyway, thank you for sharing.
lady sweet pink chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
it's so romantic :D but I can't understand some of the lines... you should make this a story XD it's really interesting :D
Le Petite Vicky chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Hi there :3

You have a very nice line here but...yes, you need a BETA.

Even when I tried to imagine each scene, I couldnt stop thinking that Hinata sounded like a latin girl, for the grammar thing; so that can be the only fail I can see here.

But hopefully, you will get a BETA soon and edit this story, because like I said, is a nice one 3

Good Luck.