Reviews for Swaying, Heaven or Hell?
theHuntgoeson chapter 9 . 10/16/2010
What an utterly superb final chapter. The quality of the writing is great, tense grim and atmospheric, and you keep the readers on the edges of their seats during that final stand-off as Emma's world collapses around her and she finds a haven with the Fenchurch crew. It's a good idea to leave the end of the story open, with Keats disappearing, Molly telling Alex that she has to stay longer, Gene and Alex growing closer but not finding any resolution to their relationship yet, and Emma joining the gang - that final scene, with them roaring off to the next adventure, is lovely. Does this mean that there will be a sequel - hint, hint?
moonbeam1987 chapter 9 . 10/8/2010
what a great way to end the story. i feel so bad for Emma for everything that happened but at least she got to find out about Jim keats. where did he disappear to? i would like to think they will caych him and kick his face in lol. i liked the bit of banter at the end it was a really nice way to bring it to an end. fantastic chapter great story.
Jazzola chapter 9 . 10/8/2010
Hahaha at the end XD

What an amazing finish to this fic... great little touch of Galex, and poor Emma. I loved it!

Thank you so much for it all :D

Jazzola :)
theHuntgoeson chapter 8 . 9/12/2010
There is a marvellous atmosphere of menace and foreboding in this story. Because Keats brought Emma into CID, I instinctively mistrusted her, but it's a great idea to make her another of Keats's blackmailed victims instead of a malign presence - her plight arouses genuine sympathy, as does Alex's sufferings (her nightmare about Molly is a spine chiller). I'm just a little surprised as to why Gene isn't making greater efforts to fins out who attacked Alex. And who is Emma's rescuer, whom Alex has to save? Please post more soon.
FireUpTheFanFic chapter 8 . 8/28/2010
i've always enjoyed reading this fanfic - it's really well written! and i'm intrigued to know what happens next . .
Ellen Asher chapter 8 . 8/28/2010
Well gwd so deserves a few more chapters babes...x!
Jazzola chapter 8 . 8/28/2010
Awesome chapter! You can't let us hang for long... keep writing!

Jazzola :)
sash queen of the jungle chapter 8 . 8/28/2010
Oh you tease how could you leave it there. Can't wait to see what happens next please update soon.
moonbeam1987 chapter 8 . 8/28/2010
sad to hear this story is coming to an end. another excellent chapter. i hope that Alex can stop gene in time becuase i have a feeling i know who the silhouette is. i wonder who untied emma and then left? hmm the action is heating up cant wait to see how it all plays out. keep up the good work. XD
moonbeam1987 chapter 7 . 7/28/2010
oh the story is getting really interesting now. i hope that emma gets out ok. I still cant work out what Jim has to do with this but i am sure it will all become clear. another great chapter keep up the good work :)
FireUpTheFanFic chapter 7 . 7/27/2010
i must say that i dont care for this Emma lass too much (; but again, a very good chapter & i look forward to reading more!
Jazzola chapter 7 . 7/27/2010
Wow... drama much? Great writing! Keep going!

Jazzola :)
moonbeam1987 chapter 6 . 7/12/2010
another great chapter. what is going on with Emma she seems to really like gene yet is afraid to say anything. what is Jim up to i hope he dosent do anything to hurt Emma. keep up the good work. cant wait to see what happens next.
Jazzola chapter 6 . 7/10/2010
Woah :O

Nice chapter! I like it!

Keep writing!

Jazzola :)
Jazzola chapter 5 . 7/1/2010
This is a great story so far, I'm loving it!

Please write more soon!

Jazzola :)
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