|Reviews for Fullmetal Phoenix|
| Pfeh chapter 19 . 12/2/2016
nvm found it
| Pfeh chapter 19 . 12/2/2016
WAIT! IS THERE NO SEQUEL! I CAN'T HANDLE THERE BEING NO SEQUEL PLEASE HAVE A SEQUEL I'M DYING I FEEL I WILL DIE IF IT ENDS HERE! PLEASE!
| FireWolves397 chapter 19 . 6/28/2016
For the next one, work on spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Otherwise, food job
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/30/2016
Seriously dude, the lack of punctuation and your bad spelling is making it really hard to read the story. I'm not trying to be mean but the way you repeat the information is getting a bit annoying. Just something to think about.
From a hiped up reader
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/30/2016
It's spelt " Quidditch" by the way ;)
| Unbelievable chapter 2 . 12/18/2015
Ed wouldn't be so arrogant and say he doesn't have fears. Unless you haven't watched the series, you would know that be fears lots of things, including:
~Never getting Al's body back
~The homunculus killing everyone
~People dying helping him
~People becoming like Nina and blaming them for it
~People who are dead blaming them for their deaths
~Al blaming him for what happened to his body and hating him-which was likely one of the biggest fears he has/had
It is likely he also fears that his mother and nina would blame him for not being able to bring her back/fix her.
Please read the manga or watch the series before writing something like this.
Ed is prideful but he (and you) should know that he would fear something.
I hope that this helps in the future and I'm sorry- I didn't mean to offend You or your writing.
Ps. I doubt Mrs. Weasley would 'smirk' and that Ed would throw a knife near someones head when he could scare them off just by ranting;)
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Great plot and chapter
| The Writer Es chapter 5 . 3/25/2015
I'm sorry, the idea is great, but I just can't finish reading this. You really need to get a beta redder to help you out with spelling and grammar. But kudos for trying! :)
| The Inferno Alchemist chapter 17 . 5/3/2014
HETALIA! (amazing anime btw)
| Loner Kid chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 3 . 12/13/2013
Who are the other three? Am I supposed to know them from somewhere?
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
You are missing a LOT of words. Why do the Fullmetal trio suddenly have magic? Needs to be explained better.
| mageoflife431 chapter 16 . 7/25/2013
Keep writing, youre doing great! I couldn't write this kindof stuf if I tried, and I can name a few of my friends who couldn't either...
| Taigon Shikkin chapter 3 . 1/31/2013
OMG! KINGDOM HEARTS! MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE VIDEO GAME EVER!
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/8/2013
Just so you know, you need to add punctuation in a lot of places, and you keep using a word that sounds the same as the one that you meant to use. Meaning, you don't use the correct word. Ex) 'He through the knife.' The word there should be threw. By the way, Ed can't transmute knives from walls. Sorry to burst your bubble or whatever, but he doesn't know how to turn wood and plaster into freaking metal. Capisce?