Reviews for The New Vampire King
RKD-CULLEN chapter 1 . 2/12
Really good start. Looking forward to more
jk chapter 6 . 11/29/2014
This is written sooooo poorly. Did you read it? Lol does it make sense to you? Its total shit
nikolasowa chapter 13 . 8/6/2014
megan.summers13 chapter 13 . 4/30/2014
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! ! FINISH YOUR STORY! ! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED NEXT. was he surprised when Bella came up and said that to him. Cuz he thought that she hated him but she really missed him. I just really want to know please write the
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megan.summers13 chapter 8 . 4/30/2014
Im not done reading the story but for now, I HATE EDWARD! ! He is a complete douchebag and doesn't even care what Bella thinks. He calls her angel but he treats her like crap. but for now this is a good story
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Interesting twist to the whole twilight saga
Guest chapter 13 . 11/10/2013
Kill Newton, Kill Newton! Yeah, he's finally dead!
Mary chapter 13 . 10/30/2013
It's pretty good but your not good with details it feels like I'm reading a story a 7th grader wrote, each chapter feels rushed. And when did Bella start liking Edward, he so mean to her. You never added much detail about when she started to have feelings for him. I think you should practice a little and you'll get better?
chipmunk742 chapter 13 . 9/23/2013
wow..please update
Guest chapter 3 . 9/14/2013
Great story, cant work out though why Edward's name was not changed so he wouldn't wonder why his name was different.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 13 . 9/11/2013
well at least she's where she wanted to be thank god now what about Mike and what about her parents
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 12 . 9/11/2013
please don't let Jacob fall for Bella and Edward go through that shit with him again please I cant stand Jacob but who is her parents wanting her to marryplease not Mike Newton
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 11 . 9/11/2013
wow are the Cullens friends with the warewofs . where is Bella and is Edward going to marry her
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 10 . 9/11/2013
did Charley pass out it that why everything went black
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 9 . 9/11/2013
ok they are both 17 that's what I thought, so what was that with Alice
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