Reviews for Secrets
CryDon'tSmile chapter 22 . 4/20
Okay, I read this before and didn't review, but I will now. Best. Ending. Ever! I swear I'm on the verge of tears. I love your work so, so much, and despite the small grammar mistakes and spelling errors there's almost nothing wrong with this story. I itch to fix the minor errors, but hey, I can easily look past them, which means it's a good story. Thank you so much for writing this.

Bye-Bye
CryDon'tSmile
angelaneahwalker chapter 22 . 10/3/2014
sniff...sniff...i'm such a girl...
Vangran chapter 23 . 7/30/2014
I love this story. It was a joy to read (my remarks on spelling and grammar notwithstanding) and I wish I could find more completed FemAllen x Tyki stories.
Vangran chapter 16 . 7/30/2014
Role, not roll. Accepted, not excepted.
Vangran chapter 9 . 7/30/2014
Clear, not rear.
Vangran chapter 7 . 7/30/2014
Mattered, not metered. Attack, not attach. Followed, not fallowed.
Vangran chapter 6 . 7/30/2014
Why not way.
Vangran chapter 4 . 7/30/2014
Catch, not ketch. Patience, not patients. Comfortable, not convertible. Matter, not mater.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/30/2014
Melissa I Lulubell I think. But isn't her hair blonde instead of red?
Lady Lazy chapter 23 . 7/28/2014
I really, really enjoyed this fic! One loose end I found, however, was that you didn't really expand on what happened with the other Exorcists (Lavi, Kanda, Lenalee) after the birth; in fact, I found it a bit of a time jump between the birth and the wedding...

Besides that, this was definitely one of the best stories I've read in a while, so kudos for such an awesome creation!
Alvin Nobody chapter 3 . 7/23/2014
You're right. the spelling and grammar kind of suck, but it is a great story.
GreenDrkness chapter 23 . 7/18/2014
This story was cute even if it caused me to want to run away many times
I wonder what happened to the remaining Exorcist
Keep on the writes
Sakihinata chapter 22 . 7/11/2014
That was a great story ;) FemAllen is good, first time reading on it
ScarletIsCool chapter 22 . 5/26/2014
This has a great ending! A very nice and sweet story...
NightHunterDeath chapter 14 . 3/29/2014
No, as soon as he says that, they both get taken away...I've already read it, but still, it would be ironic...
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