Reviews for Challenges: The Troubles With the Mera Mera n Mi
JulieXXX chapter 1 . 6/2
Love it!
LostFairyMantic chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
This is amazing. XD Oh god poor Ace, poor Luffy, imagine boiling hot semen burning up his insides, god.

Bloody amusing, though, I love this so so much. Makes me wonder...How does Akainu and Kizaru...zEewwwwww. Blocking out out memory.
poogle chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
funny
LyricoJ chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Kkk . If with luffy, lightning will be better
Hahp Ends chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Having his abilities would soooo not worth it. It's no wonder that the lava-admiral-guy was angry all the time, he would probably have more trouble than Ace.
HeartOfNewcastle chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
poor ace! he got all them looks and graces and can pull any girl he bloody wants but the moment he hits the bed (or table in one case) he is scrawed! poor acey... even luffy hates him for it... lOL

good fic u doing anymore to this anytime soon or is it just a one shot?
Panny chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Hey there

i really enjoyed this fic

so freakin awesome

"blue chicken fire" was what made me roll on the floor xDD

great fanfic there should be more like those.

i always thought about the irony ace literally hot body brought with him and wondered about him in sexual situations.

thanks for answering my questions with this fic xD i loved it
lilyoftheval5 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Poor Ace... *snickers*
yageni chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
LOL Poor Ace! this reminds me so much of a Saint Seiya fic! so funny and yes, really awesome writing too.

Thanks for the good laugh! XD
CharmingKarma chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Poor, poor Ace XD
luminouscarte chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Haha this story was truly epic. I love how you use Ace's viewpoint, especially when he described Marco as "blue chicken fire." I could totally hear Ace saying something like that. Really good humor, poor Ace. Can't wait to read more from you!
QuietInsomniac chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
and Marco was blue chicken fire,. . .

That's the both the best and the most amusing way I've ever heard Marco described as. Poor Ace! (Actually, I feel sorrier for the girls and Luffy than Ace.) XD EXCELLENT piece of writing! I love it!
Tropicall chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Freakin' hot. I wouldn't mind being burned by Ace... Hehe, this is awesome. I hope you accepy my challenge too :3
Roxxane chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I loved this. It was very well written and i dont read well written stories often (they dont exist!)

This was great and honestly makes me wonder. Haha.

Great job!
SilverStream101 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
This was funny! XD HAHAHA! Aw man... I almost feel sorry for Ace :S Well written as always!
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