Reviews for Black Rimmed Eyes
CarefreeSummer chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Beautiful poem.

I just 3 Gaara :p
Gaaras1Girl chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
"To protect thoughs who hate him.

On a day, when the last though to cross his mind"

Don't you mean:

"To protect those who hate him.

On a day, when the last thought to cross his mind"
roo17 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
I loved it! it's so true, the villagers don't see the jinchuuriki as people, but as the monsters inside them. It's really sad that people think that way :(

But i loved the poem! I give you 10/5 stars! :D
IncompleteNarrative chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Panda-chan, I feel so bad for. He deserved happiness right from the beginning like naru-chan. They deserved family. Nice poem by the way it was good and I'm assuming your wrote this poem for before the chunin exam. You're good so keep on writin'