Reviews for Fateful Bond
Akatsuki-Metal chapter 5 . 2/23/2013
this story is awesome i would love to read more
yukiko loves to meow chapter 5 . 8/9/2011
:'( plz write more chapters... i wanna noe wad happened to Roy and Riza : more more chapters, omg i act like a child whining for more sweets
CrescentSnow chapter 5 . 6/19/2011

This is something...

Please continue this story...

I really liked the fact that everything seems covered for Riza, and Riza alone...

It seems that Grumman, even Hughes and Marcoh know everything ( or at least apart) of Mustang...

Or Mustang holds something big which involves her being unable to remember something that happened...
yukiko chapter 5 . 3/24/2011
'(,i cried...i really cried...plz write more...wawawawa!X'( nice story!'(
chloe chapter 5 . 1/22/2011
oh my gosh, i loved the way you write this story, and please pelase please update! :) i really wanted to know what will happen to roy and riza in the next chapters. PLEASEEE!
Nobodysirius chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
I have been away form the computer for so long. Lets see, twas great. Made me start to tear up towards the end. I really have nothing to say this time. Yet I come bearing Gifts. A drawing if you will. Hope this works. gallery/#/d2utxpt For you.
KuroRoy chapter 3 . 7/18/2010
I'm glad to see that you have updated in the time that I've been busy. An excellent chapter; I simply enjoy your complex vocabulary and deep sentences. I must say this took me a step further into the mysterious plot that you have created.

I wholly enjoyed the fight between Mustang and Lust; it was almost like the manga, but even more intricate in words. I could imagine every smooth move Mustang made; the screams that Lust omitted as she was dying...

Time to read the next chapter.
Starry Pink chapter 5 . 7/2/2010
So Riza's met Roy before. How interesting. I hope he isn't gone for good.
ssadropout chapter 5 . 6/30/2010
So, Roy had taken Riza's memories, and perhaps the memories of others. Interesting: in a strange bit of synchronicity, something similar just happened in a novel that I am reading. Actually, a main character got her stolen memories back in the portion that I read today. Please be assured that I am not accusing you of any type of theft or copying. The stories are very different, and I know that this is just one of those coincidences. I really liked how you showed Riza's memories returning.

Well, I did like this chapter very much, and I am quite upset about Roy's dissolution. I don't know exactly what happened to him. (Did this constitute Pride bringing Roy back, or did this just neutralize Roy, hopefully just temporarily?) I certainly hope that Roy has not made his final appearance in the story! Maybe Ed and Al will know what to do.
Oceanee chapter 5 . 6/30/2010
Wow... awesome story, can't wait to find out what happens next!

Please, please, I hope Mustang doesn't disappear for good.

One question, if I understood right, in order to get his power, Roy sacrificed Riza's memories of him?

And what power would that be?

Sorry, sorry, you don't have to answer, I'll wait patiently for next one like everyone else! xD

Update soon! 3
Gamer AlchemistZ chapter 5 . 6/30/2010
woo that was crazy, cant wait for the next one
Nobodysirius chapter 4 . 6/28/2010
You are welcome. I loved Hughes. Twas' great. Sorry I really don't have much to say or write in this case. I am curious as to if the group or even the Elrics are aware of Mustang's clap transmutation abilities. I also feel bad for Mustang's feet, poor feet, and this coming from someone who has feet problems. You did not need to know that. I am now rambling, so... Please update and keep up the good work.

May life come greet you like a flight of stairs. A challenge that leads to new heights.


Starry Pink chapter 4 . 6/26/2010
It seems that Riza cares more about Roy than she's willing to admit.

Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next!
deletedforpersonalreasons chapter 4 . 6/24/2010
Interesting! I have to say I'm rather in love with this world of yours. XD Especially how gentleman-like Mustang speaks, and his protectiveness! :D D'aww, I'm a total sucker for RoyAi. It's also interesting to see Hawkeye to say, more of a centre in their relationship this time. Lovely.

D: And I have a bad feeling I know what's behind that pained look of Roy's when Hughes was mentioned...

Very good story though, do keep writing! I'll eagerly be waiting! *beams*
ssadropout chapter 4 . 6/23/2010
You did a great job showing Hawkeye's developing feelings for Mustang in this chapter. I also liked that you continue to create parallels to the FMA universe in your universe.
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