I think you meant innocent people don't stab other people. Guilty people most assuredly would stab someone else if it felt justified.

Absolutely brilliant. Spot on throughout with characterisations, dialogue, everything. Could see it all in my minds eye. Loved the dynamic created between Tony and Gibbs. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.

Wow you are a great writer! I am so impressed at how you nailed the dialog of all the characters. I could totally visualize the story as if i were watching it! Thanks for all your hard work on this story!

If only ziva and mcgee knew when to back the hell off amazing how they both have kept secrets frim the team yet tony is never allowed a secret

Ugh hate ziva only shes allowed secrets right no one else apart from gibbs is allowed secrets or a private life the stuoid bitch should be killed of so she cant ruin anymore of this fanfic

Well that was the best NCIS story i have ever read! I dont even know were to start the whole thing was amazing. i love how you kept us guessing about tonys past, i couldn't put it sdown cause i wanted to know more so bad. I also loved how you portrayed the team as a family, especially Tony anr Gibbs as father and son.

What a fun and fantastic story, thank you for sharing your time and talent with us.

Just read this again .Forgot what a BRILLIANT story it are you now.?I miss your come back to ncisfanfiction.

I remember reading this years ago and loving it, so stumbling upon it again I read it in one sitting and it is as great as I remembered it. I love the team dynamic, without the cattiness that came in later seasons but more than anything I love the father/son relationship with Tony and Gibbs. Still hoping for a sequel one day.

This was really really good. You have a way with the flow of words that makes for an entertaining read.
"If his instincts had swollen to the point where he felt the need to look after every NCIS agent, didn't she realize that for DiNozzo he'd kill?"
Loved this line reminded me of earlier seasons when Gibbs and DiNozzo were a force to reckon with.
You wrote them as son/father and partners. The team was great, but I loved how Gibbs and Tony just "got" each other...no words necessary.

I was recently trying to remember certain story fragments that I loved but couldn't find. Imagine my suprsise when I realized they all came from this and your story Fear!
You have a sometimes dark, but always well written and lovely interpreation of the characters.
I was sorry to see that your other NCIS stories were slash, but I've thoroughly enjoyed these two, and I hope you might find time to write again soon.

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Lovely! Found this story today and read it straight through. Thank u for the great read!

Really good!

Intriguing.