Reviews for Hero
Anna10473 chapter 7 . 1/5
So good! Please don't leave it like this!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/30/2017
Hello, I love your characterization of Riley. Even though( I'm assuming) she is technically an OC, she is very well written and has a "personality" to her that seems genuine and real. The interactions between her and Joker seem to be so in character .. It is very well done. One question though. I believe in the second chapter in some of the Joker's dialogue, there are words that are not spaced apart... You may mean it as a stylistic choice, but I wanted to make you aware of it. You write very well in my opinion and I hope you continue to write.
Guest chapter 7 . 9/26/2017
Oh come on you can not end it here
Guest chapter 7 . 8/29/2017
Ok so it's been... 4 years. Fun. I just want to let you know I think this story is amazing and I want to see exactly where the Joker is going with his latest project. Riley is very interesting and I hope that you someday continue this story. I'll be there if you do I guess. Thank you for writing.
Fishies2 chapter 7 . 8/11/2017
Oh my goodness what a cliffhanger. Please do update!
Guest chapter 7 . 7/28/2017
I love this. This is the best TDK fanfiction I have ever read! Joker is not out of character and your OC is nice as well. They both have nice development. I enjoyed reading this so much!I hope you update soon sweetie! I want to see what'll happen. I hope he doesnt kill her
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2017
I was enjoying this story while it lasted
WinterEveOrchid chapter 7 . 7/11/2017
This is a really great story and I hope you'll continue writing it
Ellekacy chapter 7 . 3/27/2017
Wow... This is incredible! You constantly surprise me with how well written your stories are. This is so unlike me to love original characters, but I do! I love every character in this story! I love how much detail and thought you put into your words too. My mind is literally racing with thoughts and questions right now after that cliff hanger - in the skeleton seriously Ben? Did Riley actually shoot her old boyfriend? And is she going to die from her illness? Oh, also, I don't think that the Joker is out of character at all in this story. While his actions seem unlikely and surprising, he always has an ulterior motive :) And I'm keeping in mind that Riley's perspective isn't always accurate when it comes to the Joker. Also, I'm so happy that he kissed her! And that part when he moaned in her bedroom while she was on a date with Ben and had to lie and say she had porn in there was just too funny xD I could just imagine him howling with laughter if he heard that - I feel like he gets a real kick out of humiliating people haha! Gosh, I don't know if you've abandoned this story or not - I'm guessing that you haven't and that you just haven't felt inspired lately, as you mentioned in your author's notes at the end of chapter 5, but I just wanted you to know that I'm a new fan of yours, and that I'd love to see this story continue! I'll keep an eye on my notifications in case you ever decide to resume writing for this story :) Right so sorry for this long review - I wouldn't blame you if you didn't bother to read this far xD I just prefer to save my review for the end (it's what I usually do when I come across stories long after they're published - I feel like then I won't annoy you too much by reviewing every chapter haha) Anyways, loved reading this so much, hope you continue it some day! I'm going to go read your other stories now!
Tai'shar Westernesse chapter 7 . 2/15/2017

I KNOW you're still on . You updated your profile only a few weeks ago.

So please.

For the love of everything good and holy.


It's just-it's AWESOME. It's everything I love about Joker stories. He's so in-character, and Riley is so believable, and the story just ratcheted up a notch so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE.


Meg chapter 7 . 12/26/2016
I read the whole story in a day and was enraptured by the end. At first, I wasn't so sure about it since the Joker seemed a bit OOC to me and Riley didn't have as much depth to her as I would have liked, but now I know it was just to set up the rest of the story. I'm so happy the Joker has revealed his true nature to Riley and that he's discovered a dark secret of hers to use against her and manipulate her with. You're an incredible writer and I'm obsessed with everything you've published. Please update soon when you have the time!
The Freaks chapter 7 . 11/8/2016
You've. Got. To. Finish. This. PLEASE! PLEASE! P. L. E. A. S. E!
It's such a good story!
The Freaks chapter 5 . 11/8/2016
I love it. I keep a book with little phrases or quotes in it from things I've read or liked, and the words from "But, you see, when given the choice..." to " save our own skins" is in there. It's was a great chapter.
The Freaks chapter 4 . 11/8/2016
I love this, and I can't believe I didn't tell you before! And, as a side note, I love the way the Joker is written. It's pretty awesome.
Guest chapter 7 . 9/12/2016
Oh god he's such a bastard. But I do love it when she gets a genuine reaction from him, not the premeditated ones. I would love to see more genuine out of character moments from him and it being Riley that does that to him. Please don't abandon this story. It's your best.
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