Reviews for Virtual Husband
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Fluffy but eww parents having sex and kids knowing about it makes me squwerm
baerritosandtears chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
loved it! Carlisle and Esme are such a cute couple.
NinaQ chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Very fun!
MissRe chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Yay! Yes, I'm really behind on reading. LOL I loved this. Good for Esme for taking matters into her own hands... hate that he thought the worst at first, but loved the outcome and his resolve to make sure he takes good care of his wife. Awesome job.
xXxlizardxXx chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Wow! I definitely saved the best to last! This is one of my favorite of your stories! Well done!


GLee68 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Once I got over the cringe factor of Esme watching R-rated entertainment... I LOVED IT!

That was really well written... I can visualise the changing expressions on Carlisle's face as he "catches her and then realises what she is REALLY doing"!


DILF/MILF action!

Well done!

Lunetta The Wind Goddess chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
This was a great story and I loved how you portrayed Edward's hair XD But Rene? Bad girl ha loved it!
ignore common sense chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
This is oober (haha fuunny word) good! I don't know how many tomes I've read great job
Ef-Ef-Addict chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
i love that they kinda have a thing now! like a lil something something to spice things up :)
celesticbliss chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
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AcrossTheSkyInStars chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Whoa...HOT. I freaking loved it! Congrats again on the rec you got when you posted this, I can definitely see why it was chosen. This was fantastic.

I love Esme's whole routine of Monday-Wednesday-Friday and how she begs in her head for her children to leave. It's classic and so believeable. It makes me a little sad that Carlisle had been so wrapped up in his job that he was sort of putting her second, but the Carlisle look-alike in the porno is HILARIOUS.

Possibly my favourite line (besides: "His...cock...isn't as lovely as yours, but he does look like you just a little.") is: "The actor's cock was long and hard, not as beautiful as Carlisle's, but it would do." - Picturing Esme saying "cock" and thinking it in her head just makes me giggle. It's freaking awesome and I love how she compares the porn guy to Carlisle.

Overall, it's hot and sweet and amazing. Great job on this! Loved it!
tyrablu chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Loved it!
Claire Bloom chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Wow, that was all kinds of sexy!

What is it about Carlisle in scrubs that makes me 'hungry'? He is one hot Doc and I can undertand Esme's frustrations.

I did giggle a little when Carlisle thought she was using the webcam!

Excellent, excellent use of your prompt!

tracieo chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
thanks for the old married folk love ... there is life after marriage, maybe not always this hot, but we do try ...
ZenOne chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Phew that went from Hot to AWKAWARD to mother bleepin HOT all over again!

Well Dr.C you mut've known she was bound to take care of herself sooner or later if you didn't. LOL

LMAO "Is that a HICKEY?" Bahahaha!

Loved it sweetie,

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