|Reviews for Baby|
| Buzzkill34 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
WOW! Seriously... WOW! I kinda felt bad for Lauren... but this is one kick ass story.. Thank you!
| edwardandbellabelong2gether chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Okay even though Edward was a HUGE asstard in this...I LOVED IT! I never saw that coming! I mean when they described the new girl he was with and was supposedly "serious" about I thought maybe perhaps the POV was someone diff and the new girl was Bella. But then I heard them talking in the bathroom and for some reason that made me go back to thinking the POV was Bella...SO I was COMPLETELY floored with the twist at the end. LOVED IT girl!
| FFpassion chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
God you got me good!
I thought it was Bella and I was cursing Edward thinking what the hell is going on, he is such a man whore! Damn I didn't see it coming :P
If I was Bella I'd still be kicking his arse for sleeping with Lauren the last time, looks like he will be forever reminded as he is going to be a daddy.
I can't get rid of this feeling of disappointment, he hurt Lauren but he also cheated on Bella.
Are you planning on writing any more to this? If was awesome, great job, you got me so good!
| Twilighter4life chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Woow! I actually really liked this and I usually dislike LaurenXEdward fics!
| GLee68 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Oh wow! you totally got me with the twist at the end!
That was really well done! I had palpitations by the time I got to the "confrontation"!
Edward was sooooo bad!
Beautifully done! (1st time I've EVER felt for Lauren!)
| mummyanimal chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Well I wasn't expecting that at all! But I still think Edward is a complete arsehole and Laurens a mug lol. Brilliant storybthough babe x
| Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
What a Prickward! I hope Bella dumped his a$$! esp if she found out he had been with Lauren while he was supposed to be with her! Geez hun you really know how to write Prickward stories hahahaha! but this little shit I would of gladly punched in the mouth! LOL Thanks for sharing this story I really enjoyed it even thou hes a ba$tard! Chillz x
| michellexoxo chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I thought Edward was an ass then it turned out our lovely little Bella turned out to be the other girl and now I don't feel so bad for Lauren.
| reader-giggles chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
oh man...you so had me...I never realised it could have been a non Bella POV to begin with ...i hated this Edward...i thought this was so wrong. Now i feel like shit because in the end when it's all revealed i did feel the slightest bit better he wasn't doing that to Bella...but that doesn't mean he's not a douche...to do that to any girl Bella or no Bella. I ended up liking Lauren a bit...who would have thought?
| NZTwilighter chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I was thinking, Lauren, Victoria, Heidi, etc etc, until the eavesdrop on the Lauren/Bella conversation.
Oh my God, there is no going back from Edward - I hate him!
He could have done all those things and I would have at some point been able to forgive him but the fact that he fucked Lauren after he proposed to Bella? Disgusting.
I like this fic, I really do, and I loved the twist, plus I don't always want to read about B&E perfect nuclear families and happily ever afters / can-do-no-wrong / Every other girl is a shameless slut... but please, please do not continue this. LMAO (really I am) unless we are following Lauren or Bella without Edward!
| bugsmama07 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
holy crow! what a d*ck! he was such a man whore! and then bella moves to town and he's with her but he still cheats on her w/ lauren once he asked her to get married? OMFG!
i loved this by the way! i kept going back and forth between different girls, tryin to figure out who it was. i had to go back and read the last part a couple times to make sure i read it right. :)
at first i thought that his GF might be pregnant since he was saying that she was going with him to school and stuff. but it's because they're getting married. wow. then lauren gets pregnant? that's just so crazy. and when she gives him the test, bella seems so confused and edward tries to play it off. jerk.
| AydenMorgen chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I have never hated Edward so much in my life. I don't even care if it was Lauren or Bella, I was pissed. Like hunt him down and tear his balls off pissed!
I think I may love Lauren right now. Seriously. And that NEVER happens.
You go, girl!
| gossip-bangkok chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Ok, so wait. E is an A hole and B is all forgiving.
So well written!
I love it.
Angst queen! :p