|Reviews for Baby|
| Laura chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
Aaahhh really want part 2, where is it? I want to know what happens between Edward and bella!
| RosalineMarie chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Omg this Is genius! Totaly caught me off gaurd!
| Hey Weirdo chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Well damn, you certainly threw me for a six. I immediately assumed it was Bella. I'm not a fan of the Lauren character, but after thinking back on this story, I really felt for her. Damn Edward was a total prick. Good on her for getting her one up.
| Laura chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
I feel soooo sorry for bella, he cheated on her with Lauren! At least with Edward an Lauren they were kinda both cheating on each other... Poor bella, the phrase 'once a cheater always a cheater' comes to mind when I think of what Edward did. I want part 2! :D
laura :) x
| A chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
This was seriously good, it gave a whole new light to the characters and was really well written, loved it!
| bonesbemmettlover chapter 2 . 11/22/2011
| Zhee chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
Now that I know what's going on in his mind... well, I didn't hate him that much. I'm sorry he has to put up with a cheating girlfriend.
| Zhee chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
This must be the worst Edward I have read, ever.
| muffin524 chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
It seems to me that she's already pregnant when Edward visits that last night(falling asleep, exhausted, pale) and since she finds out only one week later(that's too soon right?). That's a mean trick to play on someone even if he is sleeping around.
| muffin524 chapter 2 . 11/4/2011
I love this. I hope you still do part two because I'd really like to see EPOV of the after engagement visit to Lauren.
| miracle95 chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
Neeeed the next part of epov! Is the baby his?
| lee21761 chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
wow! this totally fucked me up! I thought you wrote the wrong names at the end. I went back to the story and scanned it because I know that you had wrote Lauren in there some where. Very very trickey!
| littlelizruth chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
OMG! that was so perfect! it wasn't until the bathroom scene that i started getting confused. then by the time he came by for one last night i was thinking about it so much that i was like wait...what? then the end...oh wow that end. so perfect!
| Marijee chapter 2 . 10/6/2011
I had to go back and read the first chapter...it was Lauren's POV...not Bella's. Duh! Egg's on me! That's what I get for not reading A/N's.
So I understand more what happened now...and what kind of crap Lauren put Edward through. I am wondering now if even the baby is Edward's.
You really tricked me! Gah! LOL! Enjoyed.
| Marijee chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
Oh man! This was such a killer. All I kept thinking was of Dirty Dancing and how Johnny always called Francis 'Baby'. Edward's 'Baby' was the total opposite. Ugh! Oh and Bella...I felt so bad for her continually going back to Edward...forgiving him. Double ugh!
Emotionally well written...it got to me!