Reviews for The Girl in the Theme Park
gypsymuse chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
This whole chapter had me laughing. I loved all the ways in which Bones tried to ruin Disney World. :D

Dare I hope there will be a visit to the Haunted Mansion at some point in this story?
MoonlightGardenias chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Okay, I'm pathetically behind in reviewing this story. I've been meaning to because well...I actually live like a half hour from Disney proper and so I usually go every year. Your descriptions of the parks and the rides are pretty spot on.

Anyway, I loved this chapter and think it was perfectly in character for Brennan to do that. I actually had a friend I went with once who started speaking to the assistants on the Haunted Mansion ride that was all like "That's not really the way you talk, is it?".

Also, the end was pretty adorable. I was almost expecting to read something about the sound of the camera on the ride going off although it's been a while since I've ridden that one. So cute. I love moments when he basically just gets to sit back and admire her letting go and being happy. Great job! :)
Cheeky-Chops chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
*squeals* I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. You write Brennan so well, especially with all the squint talk! i love how he surprised her, and soo can not wait to see her reaction. The Hodgela was cute too, "So I thought her royal highness could use a scepter" :P LOVE. Please update soon!
CMJ08 chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Hey..

I love this story! Really! It combines two of my favorite things.. Disney and Bones.. I used to work at Walt Disney World, at MGM Studios.. Every location aand whatnot you've mentioned, I have a clear mental picture of, and combined with a fluently written story with lots of goings-on and B&B love, makes for a fantastic universe.. I love this story, well done, can't wait for the next chapters!

-Cathrine
18lzytwner chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Dude! Booth made the move! So now what?

Interesting murder weapon. Seems like a girly kind of choice. Hmmm...
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Aw, this is awesome! Update soon! :)
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 6 . 6/28/2010
lol, i think about that too...

I love this story by the way :D
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
another AW moment...
go get it chapter 5 . 6/28/2010
I LOVE case stories and quickly get bored with the endless B&B romance ones. Just 'cause you're getting fewer reviews don't assume it's because people don't like case stories. It's summer and people are doing things outdoors rather than sitting at the computer. BTW, I thought I heard about a guy having a heart attack on Space Mountain a couple of years ago and subsequently dying. Maybe I'm mis-remembering and it was a 6 Flags mishap (they've had their share of accidents). And what's this about no deaths can be declared in Disney? What are they, a soverign embassey beyond the laws of the US? I can't believe they can dictate that. Anyway, I'm really enjoying your story and hope you write more case based ones in the future.
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
Aw...
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
This is awesome! xDD
hot4booth chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
I'm caught up. Great story! I loved the dancing... very hot! The last scene when Bren was caught off guard at the top of the mountain was so cute!
Melissa chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Aww best chapter yet! I loved it! :)

Pleasee continue soon! I am dying to find out what happens next!
hot4booth chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Cute story!
Angeldream05 chapter 7 . 6/27/2010
how funny! totally loved this chapter! and I looooove Disney so much too! :)) Brennan ruining Booth all the fun was so hilarious! but he got himself a payback, huh? :D can't wait to read more! :D
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