Reviews for The Girl in the Theme Park
Stepheyy chapter 2 . 6/29/2010
how do you know nobody can die in Disney world? better yet how can nobody be declared dead on Disney property?
daffodil101 chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Duuuuude you're making me wanna go to Disneyland! And since I live in Australia, this is probably the closest i'm gonna get, but I'm seriously enjoying this story nearly as much. You're good :) I love the B&B interaction, it's very much in character- i keep checking for updates, can't wait for the next chapter :)
anonymous11111111 chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
LOVED this chapter! I swear I laughed like ten times aloud! The ending was cute and I really liked Brennan all squinty with the rides. Update soon!
Aching Bones chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Hi there,

Great chapter...Bones was a bit of a killjoy alright! But I loved how she loved the final ride...Had to love how Booth kissed her...My husband and I went to Disney years ago before the kids...we were like a couple of kids ourselves going around all the loved it...We have been to Disney Paris with the kids a few times but are due to go back to Disney Florida with them sometime soon...

gypsymuse chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
This whole chapter had me laughing. I loved all the ways in which Bones tried to ruin Disney World. :D

Dare I hope there will be a visit to the Haunted Mansion at some point in this story?
MoonlightGardenias chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Okay, I'm pathetically behind in reviewing this story. I've been meaning to because well...I actually live like a half hour from Disney proper and so I usually go every year. Your descriptions of the parks and the rides are pretty spot on.

Anyway, I loved this chapter and think it was perfectly in character for Brennan to do that. I actually had a friend I went with once who started speaking to the assistants on the Haunted Mansion ride that was all like "That's not really the way you talk, is it?".

Also, the end was pretty adorable. I was almost expecting to read something about the sound of the camera on the ride going off although it's been a while since I've ridden that one. So cute. I love moments when he basically just gets to sit back and admire her letting go and being happy. Great job! :)
Cheeky-Chops chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
*squeals* I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. You write Brennan so well, especially with all the squint talk! i love how he surprised her, and soo can not wait to see her reaction. The Hodgela was cute too, "So I thought her royal highness could use a scepter" :P LOVE. Please update soon!
CMJ08 chapter 7 . 6/28/2010

I love this story! Really! It combines two of my favorite things.. Disney and Bones.. I used to work at Walt Disney World, at MGM Studios.. Every location aand whatnot you've mentioned, I have a clear mental picture of, and combined with a fluently written story with lots of goings-on and B&B love, makes for a fantastic universe.. I love this story, well done, can't wait for the next chapters!

18lzytwner chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Dude! Booth made the move! So now what?

Interesting murder weapon. Seems like a girly kind of choice. Hmmm...
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Aw, this is awesome! Update soon! :)
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 6 . 6/28/2010
lol, i think about that too...

I love this story by the way :D
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
another AW moment...
go get it chapter 5 . 6/28/2010
I LOVE case stories and quickly get bored with the endless B&B romance ones. Just 'cause you're getting fewer reviews don't assume it's because people don't like case stories. It's summer and people are doing things outdoors rather than sitting at the computer. BTW, I thought I heard about a guy having a heart attack on Space Mountain a couple of years ago and subsequently dying. Maybe I'm mis-remembering and it was a 6 Flags mishap (they've had their share of accidents). And what's this about no deaths can be declared in Disney? What are they, a soverign embassey beyond the laws of the US? I can't believe they can dictate that. Anyway, I'm really enjoying your story and hope you write more case based ones in the future.
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
This is awesome! xDD
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