|Reviews for The Girl in the Theme Park|
| Alicat76 chapter 10 . 8/7/2010
That was a great story! I'd be very interested in a sequel :) x I enjoyed how you wrote all the characters and the case was fab. I enjoy case fics as long as they're character driven, and yours definitely was :)
| Pkstarstorm chapter 10 . 8/5/2010
Awesome! That was great! U r a very skilled writer!
| cmol8806 chapter 10 . 7/31/2010
YES SEQUEL! and i liked this case fic. it wasnt too case heavy like some others ive read
| Neonpurplebubblegum chapter 2 . 7/29/2010
Okay kinda freaky the pirates ride was my favorite when I was there great story love it
| MistressDrusilla1860 chapter 10 . 7/26/2010
i bow down to u ... i loved this case centriced story so much i got ma daughter to read in after the ones shes readin now...an i dont no bot anyone else the the whole reason i love the show is the mix of cases an charcthers an how they all work together to get it solved an everyones lil querks (sp?) when inter relating.. i lmao thr out the story...u have really nailed everyone so well... keep up the great work n i hope u injoy the rest of ur summer b4 school starts again.. an im sure ull hear from me again as im goin to go read another of ur stories now.. i also read ur friends fic that u recommaned great works there too..
| Suzanne chapter 10 . 7/18/2010
Thanks for the nice story. Really well done! I'm looking forward to your next work ;)
| Suzanne chapter 7 . 7/18/2010
It's train girl again. Finally home and still reading.
This chapter (Surly Scientist) was terrific. Really as a huge disney fan and bones fan her complaints were fantastic.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
| Suzanne chapter 2 . 7/18/2010
Reading your story on the train in boston ;)
I'm on Chapter 2 and it's really spectacular! You nailed the personalities of the characters and - as a HUGE fan of Disneyland/Disneyworld you're a great job of representing the Disney spirit.
I ACTUALLY laughed out loud when the "happiest place on earth" was clarified as Disneyland. :)
| xxletgoxx chapter 10 . 7/17/2010
that is a silly q to ask everyone obiously the answer is :
YES YES YES YES YES PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ IM BEGGING YOU TO DO ONE IT WILL BE THE BEST THING THAT HAS EVER OCCURED HERE APART FROM THIS STORY BEING CREATED SO I REFER TO THE LIKE TWO ABOVE
| megan chapter 10 . 7/16/2010
loved it! great ending to a wonderful story. hope you have another one coming up in the future.
| theheartslogic26 chapter 10 . 7/15/2010
This was an amazing story! The plot was interesting, you nailed the character's dialogue, and i believed in what was happening! i appreciate the time you took to google the facts about disneyworld! a sequel WOULD BE AMAZING! keep up the great work!
| Myzinglink chapter 10 . 7/15/2010
Wow! The case was fantastic, the B/B moments were sweet and amazing...I loved it :)
| Lunalovesbones chapter 10 . 7/15/2010
A lot of interest in a sequel... A lot realy...
I loved the story and i also love case fics I just didnt review before cause I just finished reading... But it was totally Magical so I loved it. I have never gone to Disney World but Ive been at Disneyland Paris twice, so I kind of know what we feel in such magical places...
| fictitiousgirl08 chapter 10 . 7/14/2010
I really enjoyed this story - you nailed Cam and Nigel Murray's interactions really well, and I especially loved Brennan on the rides - I had to laugh. If you were to do a sequel or more case-based stories, I say go for it.
| Tadpole24 chapter 10 . 7/14/2010
Did just sit and read this entire story in one sitting. lol. It's not 3:18am, so if there's mistakes in this review, I apologise, but I couldn't leave this one without sending a review. :)
I really loved this fic. It was happy and light and at the same time, dark and scary. You incorporated those elements of the show perfectly in your writing.
The transitions between lab and Disneyworld just flowed on nicely and there was no major bumps that we had to get across to get to the next part of the fic...it all just flowed neatly along :)
The storyline was interesting and kept the twists going until the end! I kept trying to guess who it was and then something would change and I was clueless again. Excellent writing.
The little facts about Disneyworld were fun to read and they didn't feel as though they had just been forced into the fic. They actually fit really well.
I think that was about all I was going to comment on...the only other thing is that it's been nearly 2 years since I visited America and went to Disneyworld...and this fic made me miss it so much more! haha. It's motivating me to save my money so I can go back. lol
Thanks for writing, I hope you had as much fun writing as I did reading! :)