|Reviews for A Promise Made|
| StrawberryCherry chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
So Sweet! :D
| Hidden Lines chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Hm, thought I reviewed this. Must have forgotten o_O
Anyways, nicely done. The changing POVs were well handled (some fics are ruined by this) and doing so was a nice change.
| HARUKAYUKI'S FriEnD chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
OH MAI GAWD. Like, holy crap! XD! I WUVS YEW! :DDDD This story was A-mazing! BWAHAHA! ..Ehem.
I loved this soooo much! :DD I loved the change in May and Brendan's POV. It really got the story going and it made you know what was going on and I really love that. XDD! I LOVED the part where Brendan was swimming with his Swampert and Blaziken saw him and tried to tell May! And then he face-palmed. XD CLASSIC! Brilliant, I tell yew! BRILLIANT! This story was like FRIGGIN AWESOME! If you make more, I will gladly glomp you and hug you and kiss you! ..Scratch that last one.. XD I was on fanfiction rolling around and I searched for some good old Hoennshipping and BAM! I found this gorgeous story. :3 Alas, mi amiga y yo were too lazy to sign in and out. XD I hope you understand my laziness. And no, I am not Spanish, thank you.
I command you. MAKE MOREEEEEEEE! :DD Peace out!
| HarukaYuki chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
This was awesome. Really, there aren't enough BrendanxMay stories. :) I really loved this one because it was so sweet to me and my friend, who read this with me and is going to leave a review next. :) Beware, she's crazy. :)
Anyways, I would really love it if you wrote another Hoennshipping fic. I spotted no mistakes in this and I really, really want you to make more. I love all the emotions in this... Keep up the great work! )
| MunchlaxGrrl3 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
This is great. Best Hoennshipping (or ANY shipping, for that matter) one-shot I've ever read! I liked the way you balanced the POVs between May and Brendan. It's a shame that there aren't many HS fics, but this one is awesome!
I'd love to read more from you. You're a really great writer!
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| MidnightheartXxX chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
If though brendan and may isnt my fav. shipping
I loved this(: