|Reviews for Missing Chapter of FANG|
| lucy chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
I absolutely love it, until I got to the end I thought it was the winning entry. You should be an authour yourself
| Scribbles14 chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
I definantly agree with 77777Blackjack77777. Your chapter totaly depicted her struggle with Dylan. There was just one part that I found made her seam a little too close to him. The part where she wants to rub his hand over her face. I just think that makes her seam like she's falling for him a bit too much. But other than that, it is sooo GOOD!
| 77777Blackjack77777 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
I tried entering that contest too! Only... I couldn't put my ideas on paper the right way :(
I liked it. Much better than anything that popped into my mind. I'm really glad that you kept Max herself, unlike other people who make her go completly OOC and she goes gaga over Dylan.
| The Espasol chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
This. THIS is utterly cute. xD haha
It's well-written and humorous and it really follows the story! GOOD JOB!