Reviews for Telephone
xAracnaex chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
I never read anything with this pairing before but I liked this :)
Nadia26 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Great ending to a great one-shot!Congrats!:)
Daniella Consuela chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Wonderful job on this guys! I always knew you guys collaborating on something would be good and this just blew my dreams outta the water. I really hope this isn't a one-shot because I've been waiting for you guys to write a story together for the longest. More please. -Begs and Pleads-
wrasslinlvr20 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Excellent, excellent, excellent! You two totally mesh well together! I loved that this fic was so detailed, it just sucks ya right in! Chris is just so in love with Stephanie, he does so much just to be apart of her and his kids life and I'm glad he finally got to go home with Stephanie. :)

You and Jodi need to write more fix together! :D
steph-mcmahon-fan chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Okay, so I'm a dork. I usually overlook the 'A/N' if I am familiar with the writer (it's more out of anxiousness to read the story than rudeness), so I just realized that this is a one-shot. When I read the summary before entering the story, I saw that you two were collaborating, and I just wanted to read, so I didn't bother to check and see if it were marked 'complete'. Now I'm sad over this. You took me from cloud nine and brought me back down to this smuggy, rude, irritating earth. Anyways... since I now know that this is a one-shot, I owe you two a more in depth review, which I will eventually get around to, because I just LOVE this story (thus my immediate thoughts that this was more than a one-shot). Now that I know the truth... I have a question: CAN YOU LADIES PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WRITE AN 'ACTUAL' FIC TOGETHER AGAIN OR AT THE VERY LEAST CONTINUE THIS ONE OR WRITE A SEQUEL TO IT. ANYTHING? :)
steph-mcmahon-fan chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
WOW! Two of my favorite authors are coming together to spread their writing talents with us mere mortals amongst the Smoochy World... could life get any better? Lol. Seriously though, this is awesome. I knew it was bound to happen. I was just waiting patiently for it. I seen it coming, and once again I was correct in my assumptions (this is nothing new for me). I love it already. The story seems so original and a perfect blend of each of your individual writing styles. I LOVE IT! I cannot wait until the next update. I'm in a hurry right now, so I cannot elaborate as much as I would like to on this first chapter, but the reviews will become more in depth as time progresses, as Nina well knows, I can get pretty detailed in my reviews.

Peace, Love, and Smoochiness to all! :)
TakerTakeMe chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
I'm not a good reader because I can't tell which of you wrote this, but what I do know is this: it's awesome!

Two different phones for his two different women, and both phones fit perfectly for the woman they're assigned to. The Blackberry is more business-like, and from what I've heard they're always locking up and getting on their owners' nerves. The iPhone...it's the one you want to show off to your friends, the one you want to play with, the one where everything is just a touch away...

I like this, I really do. I'm glad he sent Jessica the wrong text message. It's about time the secret gets out. They're all living a lie, why prolong it? I was worried about how Stephanie would take it but obviously she took it well and I have my fingers crossed for their happy ending.

Great beginning!

J
missban1997 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
awww, the ending was sweet. actually the whole story was great! :)
Vera Roberts chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I like it!

What I really like about this story (maybe I'm just reading too much into this, go figure)are the phone comparisons. One is playful, fun, and interesting little things while the other is more serious, professional and business-like. The phones suit the women in Chris' life very well and it wasn't a mistake he chosen a particular phone for each woman.

I especially love the prose, the setting of the story. The background gives a lot of detail without revealing too much. You show that Chris is conflicted by what he's doing as he loves and cares for both women but he clearly has a fire for one of them.

Great job, ladies! It was a great story to read!
dodjet chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Man, you guys knocked it out of the park! That was great. The angst was off the charts in the beginning which I love of course. I could feel Chris' pain in wanting to be there for all of his children and for Stephanie. Thankfully he finally got the courage to tell Jessica the truth after the initial accident of texting the wrong phone. Glad Stephanie was okay with it too and even possibly relieved since she hadn't had the courage to do the same. The best part was being able to tell Aurora he was coming home "today". Loved, loved, loved it!
CULater chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
This is fantastic. You both did amazing jobs delineating the tension eating him up. I like the contrast of phones as an analogy of the contrasting relationships with both women. And for some reason that text steph sent him, "I miss your hands. I had this dream about you last night, it was...interesting ;-) I just spilled coke on my t-shirt, I'm a dork. Thank you for the flower, I love daisies xxx."..it's so cute and I can't really tell you why. Maybe it just adds to the image of Steph being a different shy-er person w/Chris.

And it breaks my heart how he misses his daughters. If anything I hate HHH more when I read that because he is always cheating someone out of something. Despite the weird circumstances, it shimes through how much Chris loves his kids and what a good dad he is. I cant see paul walking fussy Murphy.

Maybe Chris subconsciously wanted found out, i don't know but I am glad they get a happy ending ! IMHO you r collaboration is wonderful