|Reviews for 28 Weeks Later: EMPIRE|
| Juuaichi chapter 4 . 7/10/2011
aaawww fuck just fucking kill those kids goddamit :(
| Irish99 chapter 4 . 10/9/2010
Hope there's more.
| Saito chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Saw some typo etc( lieutenant) unless that was intentional...other than that quite an interesting story however a bit long winded for me though.
| rutger5000 chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Okay this seems like a good story, I must admit I didn't read through it all. That took a little bit too much effort for my tired mind (it's 01:03 here).
Though the time at which I reading this is certainly an important factor, I also think that you could make the story more readable. This feels too much like huge bricks of text. I would advice trying to make smaller pharagraphs and shorter chapters. That makes it much more comfortable too read.
Otherwise I can't really find anything wrong with it.