Reviews for Moon
ssigerson chapter 6 . 9/11/2016
I love your stories for their amazing characterization and story lines and well you cover such a wide timeline. However, I'm equally upset how many stories you have left undone! :-)
Caitlin Alexandra chapter 6 . 8/20/2016
I always wanted to know, how Lavender and the "Mysterious" Mark I didn't know from the books came together, this is a wonderful story I really enjoyed.
It is really Lavender like, I like how you describe her and I think Mark is adorable (how many guys would do something like what he did to Lavender?). I honestly had a few problems with the firstchapter, but after reading it thrice I understood (most of) it. But that is probably just because English isn't my first Language.
Prince Pondincherry chapter 5 . 4/22/2016
This was great. Suddenly makes me wonder what Mark's been up to all these years since we first met him, but I'm sure it was just boring work at his job. And I feel like we missed out on a great story with the vampire, although I'm sure that's the point.
peps281 chapter 6 . 4/19/2016
Wow! I love this story and your characterization of Lavender. And of course Mark. I am so happy that the first night he spent with her was a full moon night. She knows that he loves her for who she is.
Teneombre chapter 6 . 8/27/2015
A really beautifull story, even if the scotish accent is pain in the ass for those who doesn't speak english well


Time's Quill chapter 6 . 7/27/2014
I really love watching these two grow up together. Very nice! :D
Lady Phoenix Fire Rose chapter 6 . 6/21/2014
YAY! Way to go Lavender, I had half a mind to slap her upsid the head, but looks like she doesn't need me too. Mark is awesome!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/10/2014
I love Mark, he works so well with Lavender. You have a real talent with original characters. And I look forward to reading about Lavender vs. a vampire.
mellpell chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
I never really liked lavender and I know I wasnt alone in that. But I like this lavender a lot. She's not just some dumb ditz shes scarred and cursed and I'm happy she finally let someone in. Mark is pretty sweet. I remember reading about mark in tales of the battle and coundlt recall if I knew him. I now see he is all yours and his sister was one of the original 40 names for jk for harrys class. Love it, greag tale. And so glad lavender found someone who is good for her. :-)
GinLoran chapter 6 . 3/24/2013
I love how you've taken a marginal character that was never more than an annoyance to me and made her so compelling. I've been reading your stories in their timeline order (thank you for the list in your bio!) and I really am interested in what will become of Lavender. Never thought I'd say that - well done and thank you!
Unremarkableforever chapter 6 . 3/4/2013
I really like your Lavender (-stories). Here she's a bit of a b... at the beginning, but no one is beyond redemption, obviously.

I have always wondered about the name "Remus Lupin". I think JKR went a bit overboard here. "Remus" being one of the founders of Rome who had been nursed by a she-wolf, and Lupin referring to "lupus", the Latin word for wolf. This doesn't sound like Remus Lupin was bitten as a small child, it rather suggests at least third generation Lycanthropy ;-)
MrRobertsIII chapter 6 . 1/13/2013
Very sweet. Liked Moon. You do a great job with original characters. Hope you are writing some of your own stuff.
noonie chapter 6 . 11/10/2012
I love to see Lavender FINALLY happy... I don't remember Mark moon from Canon - is he? thanks for writing, I've enjoyed reading this and many of your other stories over the past week or so.
Man of Kent - Railwayman chapter 6 . 7/23/2012
Interesting and well written, really enjoyable!
NoTagBacks chapter 6 . 4/27/2012
I had to reread this after finishing "Moons." I still owe you a review from the last chapter of that one. I also needed to read it before the next chapter of "Strangers" is released.

I really like this story. Maybe it's because I picture myself as Mark Moon, with a girl who's out of my league. I know a good part of the reason I like it is because of the great characterization of Lavender - she's bitchy, beautiful, tragic, sweet, scarred, frilly, acerbic, sexy, needy, brave, and lonely. And complex, too. :-)

You had to write this story after the beautifully tragic "Bare." It's the missing happy ending.

Mark has depths that are only hinted at in this story. There's more of him in "Moons," but I'd love to read more. Are there other stories coming that will tell more about him? Was he in "Tales of the Battle"? I'll have to reread that one, too.
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