Reviews for Harbinger's Dawn
BlackMajjicDuchess chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
You missed an Inuzuka Rin in there, right near the end.

This is equally as creepy and mysterious as the first Harbinger tale... and thanks for sharing. This was more along the lines of what I was looking for. _
silvablaze chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
*shivers* um... That was beautiful (& creepy as hell but thats good, hehe)...
Ashen Warrior chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
definitely a worthy read... (I just wish I knew what rin had done.) any chance of a second chapter explaining? No? *sigh* fine.

Well written & captivating. Good job,

Ash
rizember chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
oh thats just mean! What happened? What happened? Please tell... Pleeeeese. *on knees begging pitifully* darn yew!

Um...ignoring my lil break down, that's quite an interesting oneshot. Wish I knew what the hell rin had done tho... *hint hint...puppy dog eyes*
ncfan chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Okay, I'm just going to take a guess that she did something to herself that made her something other than human. Minato's reaction (the white face, the refusing to talk about it and so on) only makes me more curious.

Of course, this also sounds a great deal like a descent into madness fic.

All I know, is that you were probably right not to detail what it was that Rin learned; it's so much more fun to speculate, make wild guesses, and so on.