Reviews for The Lost and Forgotten
Sayuri Dei-chan chapter 16 . 12/28/2011
C-chelsea? Really? OAO"

I've never thought that it would be her. I thought it was witch princess, but then she appeared.

Until you describe about the 'voice' appearance, I still didn't know who is she, maybe just random girl, I thought.

It's awesome, the way you make readers more interested about the story XDD

keep up the good work and keep updating OuOb

btw, sorry for the bad english lol
Sayuri Dei-chan chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
This story is really great *A* actually, I'm not much a fan of suspense or horror (just like Elliot, lol)

I haven't read it until the 16th chapter, but I can't wait to continue X3

I love Mark's personality here 8DD

Keep updating
RandomPebble chapter 16 . 12/11/2011
Wow, I never expected that it would be her. That last line came as a shock to me and I started spazzing in front of my sister...

Anyway, this is really well written and I'm looking forward to later updates!
Winter Oak chapter 16 . 12/10/2011
This chapter does an excellent job of communicating the seriousness of the situation. Witch now knowing what the Voice is and the Harvest Goddess not being there any longer because of the Voice just makes her feel really frightening.

And wow, I should have been able to guess who the Voice was. Now I feel kind of slow. XD

I'm so happy about all the updates. Hehe, have you been feeling inspired lately? :)
Winter Oak chapter 14 . 12/5/2011
Oh, my brother has one of the Fatal Frame games. The graphics are beautiful but I've never had the urge to try it.

That the Voice has the ability to flood a field is pretty scary and Mark's interaction with her had me hoping he wouldn't get injured during the process. He's really grown on me.

Anyway, I'm glad to see an update! I hope you're doing well.
My Solitude chapter 13 . 10/22/2011
This really is suspenseful. I hope you update soon (even if I'm scared to death '-.-).
xxxAmberBearxxx chapter 13 . 4/13/2011
Wow. This story is seriously amazing.

I don't review stories much, but this has got to be one of the best I have ever read. I love the way you write, with all the little details and stuff. Way better than I could do in a million years.

Anyways, I love this story. Please write more :)
RandomPebble chapter 13 . 4/11/2011
Wow! I really love this story!

It's so mysterious. What is the Voice's identity?

I also really want to know Mark's past, and how everything all came to be.

At the end of the chapter when there were the feet just makes me want to read more!
Winter Oak chapter 13 . 4/6/2011
Once again, I adore the little details you put in your story. I wouldn't ever think about mentioning how a character wraps her feet around the chair legs while sitting. It's one of those things that adds subtly to the character as the story goes along.

The way Mark casually says salt can keep the ghost out and only when Natalie asked was kind of odd considering his earlier thoughts on it. Though maybe that was done for a reason. There's still a lot about Mark that the readers don't know, isn't there?

I enjoyed this chapter. Good job! :3
Winter Oak chapter 12 . 3/14/2011
I'm sure you'll eventually find more inspiration for the story. Either way, the updates aren't that far apart and the way this story differs from most of the other ones in this fandom makes it so that I don't need to go back and check what happened before. Haha, or at least, that's how it is for me.

Anyway, good chapter! I liked reading about both characters' thoughts on the matter. I guess it offered some different perspectives to think about because I still have no idea what is going on. XD
Winter Oak chapter 11 . 1/11/2011
Oh... it seems like I missed a chapter. My apologies, though it seems like it worked out for the best since you modified it... then again, it would have been interesting to see what you changed. XD

I like how you're revealing pieces of Mark's past little by little. He's kind of a mystery himself. I feel bad for him, after hearing about when he first came to be able to hear voices. It must have been tough, but it's admirable how he grew to be a person that is kind to others despite the poor treatment he must have faced.

I also like the appearance you chose for the Voice. It's pretty eerie with the mud and the bone... and was fitting for the mood of the story.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter.

Take care,

Winter Oak
Winter Oak chapter 9 . 11/3/2010
I'm glad you updated! Been busy lately?

The Voice just got creepier. At first, I thought the Voice was the Harvest Goddess, but I'm not so sure anymore. I mean, I can't imagine any other character that would fit the role, but she doesn't seem to have the traits that I would imagine the Harvest Goddess to have. Hopefully the Voice's identity will be revealed soon. XD

This was a rather short chapter but I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. :)
Winter Oak chapter 8 . 10/14/2010
I liked the answer Denny gave to Mark about why he became a fisherman. Back stories with characters that overcome painful events and grow stronger are so awesome. The story and the events after tell a lot about Denny's personality as well.

Poor Mark. He thinks he's going crazy. XD
Winter Oak chapter 7 . 10/7/2010
Another intriguing chapter. The missing keys and locked rooms were something I didn't expect. With the incident in the previous chapter and the happenings in this one, it's beginning to seem like the hotel holds some significance.

Ah, I still can't piece anything together though. Perhaps I should read more horror stories. ;)

And sorry for the late review. I haven't been on fanfiction as much lately.
Winter Oak chapter 6 . 8/6/2010
I'm happy that you found the time to update this story. Ah, now that it's so much more suspenseful, I'm really, really, really looking forward to the next chapter. XD

I liked how you portrayed the spirit. The use of ellipses in its speech gave it a very ghostly and timeworn character. The fact that Mark doesn't seem to be able to communicate with spirits using his thoughts made the thought of facing or angering the mysterious beings very intimidating as well.

Good job with the chapter! I look forward to the next update.
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